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THE CHANGES OF THE POPULATION'S WEIGHT

THE CHANGES OF THE POPULATION'S WEIGHT P60xK

The table displays the density of society between 1999 and 2009. Overall, the table separates the density into three various part such “under”, “normal”, and “over”, and examine the women and men population under them. Firstly, half of the people were always close to the average density, between 47 and 51 percent were the numbers that the female population collects in the period of 1999 to 2009, same goes for males, however, they have never reached half of them, the highest rate was %48 at a normal weight. There was a minimal increase in the statistic of women between 1999 and 2004 in “under weight”, then it followed by a slight decrease of 28 percent in 2009, although, men’s group had reduced first then gained a considerable expand. Lastly, the women’s group expanded by three percent and reached 21% five years later the number of females weight went down to 19%. The number of males significantly fell to 23% in 2004 then they continued to lose kilos and in 2009, only 19% of male population was overweight.

The table displays the density of society between 1999 and 2009. Overall
, the table separates the density into three various part such “under”, “normal”, and “over”, and examine the women and men
 population under them.

Firstly
, half of the people
 were always close to the average density, between 47 and 51 percent were the numbers that the female population collects in the period of 1999 to 2009, same goes for males, however
, they have never reached half of them, the highest rate was %48 at a normal weight.

There was a minimal increase in the statistic of women between 1999 and 2004 in “under weight”, then it followed by a slight decrease of 28 percent in 2009, although, men
’s group had reduced
first
 then gained a considerable expand.

Lastly
, the women’s group expanded by three percent and reached 21% five years later the number of females weight went down to 19%. The number of males significantly
 fell to 23% in 2004 then they continued to lose kilos and in 2009, only
 19% of male population was overweight. 

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