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STUDY PLAN FOR A BACHELOR’S DEGREE

STUDY PLAN FOR A BACHELOR’S DEGREE 7Gkey
My name is Ye Htet Soe. I am a fifth year student from Yangon Technological University majoring in Architecture. I hereby would like to apply for Architecture specialization in Pusan National University with its remarkably long history and great reputation. Through world class researches and educational innovations, it is clear that PNU provides quality education which I have always desired to be equipped with. After studying Architecture for 4 years in Yangon Technological University, I was fortunate to discover my passion in sustainable designs and approaches, eco-friendly urban planning and green building technologies. And I also discovered that PNU’s BEST(Building Environment and Services Tech) laboratory targets for these fields and produces amazing performances. Thus, I am applying for the Architecture major to become a PNU-trained architect and I intend to do a thesis research on one of the fields mentioned above. Before my arrival to Korea, I will try to improve my four skills in Korean. I will prepare to cope with the vocabularies and terms used in Korea’s everyday life and in the bachelor degree course. As for English, although I have some proficiency, I still need to develop my speaking skills as it is not normally used in everyday life. I will try to become a fluent speaker so that I can communicate with intellectuals from different countries. Therefore, after my intensive language study before my arrival to Korea and 6-month language program, I am confident to be able to communicate properly by then. It is my goal to gain the bachelor degree first and pursue further study in the fields of sustainability and urban design. I am aiming to achieve a postgraduate degree on one of these fields of Architecture. In the first year of the bachelor degree program, I will commit myself into studying science subjects and fundamentals of Architecture which are the foundations of the study years ahead. In the year of second and third, I will put my most effort into majoring studies while giving full attention to supplementary subjects as well. The fourth of my academic year would be the time when I am capable of collecting information and doing some researches in order to develop a thesis title which is to be approved by professors and my thesis advisor. In the final year, I will try my best to do thorough researches following specific guidelines and methodologies to develop a strong thesis and submit it. Throughout my years of study, I am fully confident to keep a strong G. P. A every year as Architectural studies has always been my passion. After studying my academic years with full commitment, I would like to serve for Architectural Practices in Korea for some years to get the privilege of working in a developed country. These experiences and knowledge will definitely help me establish holistic approaches and innovative works that can ensure a sustainable society in my home country. As one of the bridges between Korea and Myanmar, I strongly hope to be able to create sustainable designs and solutions and engage in crucial issues of my country especially in urban areas. I also imagine myself to be an architect with a dedication for an important social responsibility to make a positive difference in the world.
My name is Ye
Htet
Soe
. I am a fifth
year
student from Yangon Technological University majoring in
Architecture
. I hereby would like to apply for
Architecture
specialization in Pusan National University with its
remarkably
long history and great reputation. Through world
class
researches
and educational innovations, it is
clear
that
PNU
provides quality education which I have always desired to
be equipped
with. After studying
Architecture
for 4 years in Yangon Technological University, I was fortunate to discover my passion in sustainable designs and approaches, eco-friendly urban planning and green building technologies. And I
also
discovered that
PNU
’s BEST(Building Environment and Services Tech) laboratory targets for these
fields
and produces amazing performances.
Thus
, I am applying for the
Architecture
major to become a
PNU-trained
architect and I intend to do a
thesis
research
on one of the
fields
mentioned above.
Before
my arrival to Korea, I will try to
improve
my four
skills
in Korean. I will prepare to cope with the vocabularies and terms
used
in Korea’s everyday life and in the bachelor
degree
course. As for English, although I have
some
proficiency, I
still
need to develop my speaking
skills
as it is not
normally
used
in everyday life. I will try to become a fluent speaker
so
that I can communicate with intellectuals from
different
countries
.
Therefore
, after my intensive language
study
before
my arrival to Korea and 6-month language program, I am confident to be able to communicate
properly
by then. It is my goal to gain the bachelor
degree
first
and pursue
further
study
in the
fields
of sustainability and urban design. I am aiming to achieve a postgraduate
degree
on one of these
fields
of
Architecture
. In the
first
year
of the bachelor
degree
program, I will commit myself into studying science subjects and fundamentals of
Architecture
which are the foundations of the
study
years ahead. In the
year
of second and third, I will put my most effort into majoring
studies
while giving full attention to supplementary subjects
as well
. The fourth of my academic
year
would be the time when I am capable of collecting information and doing
some
researches
in order to develop a
thesis
title which is to
be approved
by professors and my
thesis
advisor. In the final
year
, I will try my best
to do
thorough
researches
following specific guidelines and methodologies to develop a strong
thesis
and submit it. Throughout my years of
study
, I am
fully
confident to
keep
a strong G. P. A every
year
as Architectural
studies
has always been my passion. After studying my academic years with full commitment, I would like to serve for Architectural Practices in Korea for
some
years to
get
the privilege of working in a developed
country
. These experiences and knowledge will definitely
help
me establish holistic approaches and innovative works that can ensure a sustainable society in my home
country
. As one of the bridges between Korea and Myanmar, I
strongly
hope to be able to create sustainable designs and solutions and engage in crucial issues of my
country
especially
in urban areas. I
also
imagine myself to be an architect with a dedication for an
important
social responsibility to
make
a
positive
difference in the world.
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