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Strategy in My Organization

Strategy in My Organization Q6Pow
I am one of the directors in a Thai cuisine restaurant. Our company targets families and adults with mid-low income. Geographic and income distribution are our main considerations in opening shop. We are in Cheung Sha Wan next to MTR station, which is a high foot traffic area and able to access our target customers easily. Business Level Strategies We are adapting cost leadership strategies to aim at a board market and focus on creating low cost. Our company sets the price of our food at an affordable price. For example, our menu price ranged from about $28 to $70 which is below-average comparing to the restaurants near our shop. We found it beneficial to maintain sustainability that customers are willing to return especially for those who live in the surrounding areas. We implement this strategy considering the external environmental factors that people live around our restaurant are mainly mid-low income and have high preference for food takeaway from a low-priced restaurant during pandemics period. Our restaurant revenue remains stable because of increased takeaway orders notwithstanding the social distancing measures. However, it requires a load of sales to maintain profitability. Further, I realise our current strategy focusing on a low cost may not sustain as a competitive advantage if another restaurant near our shop offers a lower price. Since this is not rare, valuable, hard to imitate and substitutable. Hence, I consider developing core contingencies based on our resource and capabilities to gain further competitive advantages are crucial. Recommendation I recommend other directors to adapt digitalisation in restaurants to allow customers ordering via digital menu on mobile apps and to introduce “robot waiter” to replace 50% of waiters with robot serving food while the waiters can perform other duties that the Robot waiter cannot do such as customer service. Cost for a robot waiter is about $3000 per months according to the Hong Kong Broadband Networks, which is almost five times lower than a waiter’s salary. Thus, it can reduce labour cost significantly. Furthermore, it could optimise table turnover rate and promote operational efficiency to shorten waiting time to take orders and allow us to process more orders. It would eventually increase the restaurant's ability to serve more customers, generate more sales to minimise our concern avoiding inadequate sales and enhance customers loyalty and dining experience due to quick service. I believe it can also develop our core competencies as a digitalized restaurant to obtain competitive advantage with positive effect for brand marketing to attract new customers that allow us to compete against rivals since digitalized restaurant with robot waiters are valuable and rare in Hong Kong currently. It may be hard to imitate by some traditional restaurants but not for some modern restaurant. It could also be substitutable. Nevertheless, we can still enjoy the benefit before the market imitates and adjust our strategy later when digitalisation no longer serves its competitive advantage. Digital menu and robot waiter are relatively cost effective that we have sufficient resources to implement at this stage. Our company size is small with limited cash flow. Strategy requires big investment such as M&A, internationalisation, diversification is not feasible. Moreover, we have limited market power and bargaining power, we will face substantial obstacles to implement cooperative strategy with other firms. After the revenue growth of our restaurant becomes stable with sufficient finance resources, we can consider other strategies such as expanding market share by opening further shops. Conclusion I recommend our company to digitalise at this point for the purpose to differentiate our company from competitors and to create value under budget.
I am one of the directors in a Thai cuisine
restaurant
. Our
company
targets families and adults with mid-low income. Geographic and income distribution are our main considerations in opening shop. We are in
Cheung
Sha
Wan
next
to MTR station, which is a high foot traffic area and able to access our target
customers
easily
. Business Level Strategies We are adapting
cost
leadership
strategies
to aim at a board
market
and focus on creating low
cost
. Our
company
sets the
price
of our food at an affordable
price
.
For example
, our menu
price
ranged from about $28 to $70 which is below-average comparing to the
restaurants
near our shop. We found it beneficial to maintain sustainability that
customers
are willing to return
especially
for those who
live
in the surrounding areas. We implement this
strategy
considering the external environmental factors that
people
live
around our
restaurant
are
mainly
mid-low income and have high preference for food takeaway from a low-priced
restaurant
during pandemics period. Our
restaurant
revenue remains stable
because
of increased takeaway orders notwithstanding the social distancing measures.
However
, it requires a load of sales to maintain profitability.
Further
, I
realise
our
current
strategy
focusing on a low
cost
may not sustain as a
competitive
advantage if another
restaurant
near our shop offers a lower
price
. Since this is not rare, valuable,
hard
to imitate and substitutable.
Hence
, I consider developing core contingencies based on our resource and capabilities to gain
further
competitive
advantages are crucial. Recommendation I recommend
other
directors to adapt
digitalisation
in
restaurants
to
allow
customers
ordering via digital menu on mobile apps and to introduce “robot
waiter”
to replace 50% of
waiters
with robot serving food while the
waiters
can perform
other
duties that the Robot
waiter
cannot do such as
customer
service.
Cost
for a robot
waiter
is about $3000 per months according to the Hong Kong Broadband Networks, which is almost five times lower than a
waiter’s
salary.
Thus
, it can
reduce
labour
cost
significantly
.
Furthermore
, it could
optimise
table turnover rate and promote operational efficiency to shorten waiting time to take orders and
allow
us to process more orders. It would
eventually
increase the restaurant's ability to serve more
customers
, generate more sales to
minimise
our concern avoiding inadequate sales and enhance
customers
loyalty and dining experience due to quick service. I believe it can
also
develop our core competencies as a digitalized
restaurant
to obtain
competitive
advantage with
positive
effect for brand marketing to attract new
customers
that
allow
us to compete against rivals since digitalized
restaurant
with robot
waiters
are valuable and rare in Hong Kong
currently
. It may be
hard
to imitate by
some
traditional
restaurants
but
not for
some
modern
restaurant
. It could
also
be substitutable.
Nevertheless
, we can
still
enjoy the benefit
before
the
market
imitates and adjust our
strategy
later when
digitalisation
no longer serves its
competitive
advantage. Digital menu and robot
waiter
are
relatively
cost
effective that we have sufficient resources to implement at this stage. Our
company
size is
small
with limited cash flow.
Strategy
requires
big
investment such as M&A,
internationalisation
, diversification is not feasible.
Moreover
, we have limited
market
power and bargaining power, we will face substantial obstacles to implement cooperative
strategy
with
other
firms. After the revenue growth of our
restaurant
becomes stable with sufficient finance resources, we can consider
other
strategies
such as expanding
market
share by opening
further
shops. Conclusion I recommend our
company
to
digitalise
at this point for the purpose to differentiate our
company
from competitors and to create value under budget.
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