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Storytelling: Create a story that includes the following quote: “The Earth is a fine place and worth fighting for.” (Ernest Hemingway)

Storytelling: Create a story that includes the following quote: “The Earth is a fine place and worth fighting for. ” (Ernest Hemingway) pM1Em
Oh my god, some please help me, I’m too hot, my face is full of ugly fissures, smoke is everywhere, it’s so hard to breathe. I’m gonna be sick! Somewhere in the dark, Harry suddenly hears a strange intangible voice calling for help. The lastest thing he could remember was an old boring office where he was run out of ideas for the new work. Curiously, he said: “Hi! ”. But it seems like that creature could not hear him. Oh my dear Earth, what’s wrong? – said another creature. Hi Sun! I’m not very good. You see, everywhere in my body is so bad. My land skin, sea blood, stone bones are all polluted. Harry was trembled by the mystery conversation that surely between the Sun and the Earth. That’s hilarious! How could the planet and the star talk? He told himself firmly and tried to get out of that, but the Sun continues asking: That’s so bad! Why is it happening? I’m exhausted because of my children-humans. People are killing animals excessively. Also, they are making deforestation, dumping trash into the ocean, releasing unfiltered gases that make air and water pollution, climate change, etc. Along with those habits, they are also competing in markets, causing wars, … All these things are destroying the environment. However, they have been doing it for centuries without thinking of the result. At the beginning of my life, I had to go through many difficulties and then growing and growing until today, I “gave birth” to creatures including humans and have become the only planet that has life. I was hurt, but worth it. And today, my kids are doing my improving job, and I’m living in pain again. They apparently could still develop without harming nature, but many of them chose this fastest way. They just think about the achievement but forget the negative consequences. And this has gone too far and beyond my endurance. I’m dying! If people are hurt, either do I. If I'm sick, they couldn't avoid weakness as well. We are not separate. We live based on each other. So I need help from now on! Harry was impressed by the story of the Earth. He realized the necessity and urgency of protecting the planet, which he always called “Mother Earth” after that. He started going around the world, giving speeches and writing books to encourage people to take action to save the environment. In every of his activity, he emphasized: “The Earth is a fine place and worth fighting for. ” Besides, he pointed out what Mother Earth has been giving us and how we have been killing her, and what we do to Earth is we do to ourselves. Although Harry was not welcomed by many people, he never gave up. All he had, is belief and passion for healing our Mother. His job worked and has inspired many youngsters and people to protect nature and become an inspiration like him. Perhaps the conversation between the two inanimate objects was just an unrealistic dream that had incidentally made changes or was a call that Mother Earth has sent to him- the chosen one whose mission was to save our planet. What we need to do now is to make sustainable – which means to balance the development of 3 factors: economic, society and environment. If you don’t mind about these changes because u don’t have to deal with it, just think about the younger and younger generation, what your descendants might have to suffer from what we – their ancestor has done. Mother Earth has been giving us uncountable conditions, but whether what we are doing is worth that love? People’s apathy is bringing the environment to the ruin verge. That’s so unfair. Please stop! Let’s think about the future’s fate, of us, and our planet. We don’t have a planet B, so we gotta take care of the one we’re on. Before dreaming of becoming a superhero that saves the Earth, please be the person who is harmless to our beloved planet. The Earth is a fine place and worth fighting for. Thank you very very much!
Oh my god,
some
please
help
me, I’m too hot, my face is full of ugly fissures, smoke is everywhere, it’s
so
hard
to breathe. I’m
gonna
be sick! Somewhere in the dark, Harry
suddenly
hears a strange intangible voice calling for
help
. The
lastest
thing he could remember was an
old
boring office where he
was run
out of
ideas
for the new work.
Curiously
, he said: “Hi! ”.
But
it seems like that creature could not hear him.
Oh
my dear
Earth
, what’s
wrong
?
said another creature. Hi Sun! I’m not
very
good
. You
see
, everywhere in my body is
so
bad
. My land skin, sea blood, stone bones are all polluted. Harry
was trembled
by the mystery conversation that
surely
between the Sun and the
Earth
. That’s hilarious! How could the
planet
and the star talk? He
told
himself
firmly
and tried to
get
out of that,
but
the Sun continues asking: That’s
so
bad
! Why is it happening? I’m exhausted
because
of my children-humans.
People
are killing animals
excessively
.
Also
, they are making deforestation, dumping trash into the ocean, releasing unfiltered gases that
make
air and water pollution, climate
change
, etc. Along with those habits, they are
also
competing in markets, causing wars, … All these things are destroying the
environment
.
However
, they have been doing it for centuries without thinking of the result. At the beginning of my life, I had to go through
many
difficulties and then growing and growing until
today
, I “gave birth” to creatures including humans and have become the
only
planet
that has life. I
was hurt
,
but
worth
it. And
today
, my kids are doing my improving job, and I’m living in pain again. They
apparently
could
still
develop without harming nature,
but
many
of them chose this fastest way. They
just
think
about the achievement
but
forget the
negative
consequences. And this has gone too far and beyond my endurance. I’m dying! If
people
are hurt
, either do I. If I'm sick, they couldn't avoid weakness
as well
. We are not separate. We
live
based on each other.
So
I need
help
from
now
on! Harry
was impressed
by the story of the
Earth
. He realized the necessity and urgency of protecting the
planet
, which he always called
“Mother
Earth”
after that. He
started
going around the world, giving speeches and writing books to encourage
people
to take action to save the
environment
. In every of his activity, he emphasized: “The
Earth
is a fine place and
worth
fighting for. ”
Besides
, he pointed out what
Mother
Earth
has been giving us and how we have been killing her, and what we do to
Earth
is we do to ourselves. Although Harry was not welcomed by
many
people
, he never gave up. All he had, is belief and passion for healing our
Mother
. His job worked and has inspired
many
youngsters and
people
to protect nature and become an inspiration like him. Perhaps the conversation between the two inanimate objects was
just
an unrealistic dream that had
incidentally
made
changes
or was a call that
Mother
Earth
has
sent
to him- the chosen one whose mission was to save our planet. What we need to do
now
is to
make
sustainable
which means to balance the development of 3 factors: economic, society and
environment
. If you don’t mind about these
changes
because
u don’t
have to
deal with it,
just
think
about the younger and younger generation, what your descendants might
have to
suffer from what we
their ancestor has done. Mother
Earth
has been giving us uncountable conditions,
but
whether what we are doing is
worth
that
love
?
People’s
apathy is bringing the
environment
to the ruin verge. That’s
so
unfair.
Please
stop
!
Let
’s
think
about the future’s fate, of us, and our
planet
. We don’t have a
planet
B,
so
we
gotta
take care of the one we’re on.
Before
dreaming of becoming a superhero that saves the
Earth
,
please
be the person who is harmless to our beloved planet. The
Earth
is a fine place and
worth
fighting for. Thank you
very
very
much!
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