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Soviet Art Vs Nazi Art in 21 century

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QualityNazi Germany and the Soviet Union could not have been more different, though they relied on many of the same mechanisms to maintain their totalitarian control of power. Nazi Germany was a fascist dictator ship, with all decisions coming from the top down. The Soviet Union was a one-party socialist state, and although its eras in history are marked by the president, power rested mostly in the hands of the party. Aside from the differences in political structures between Nazi Germany and Soviet Russia, each state had very different goals in mind upon its construction. Nazi Germany existed under the direct orders of Adolf Hitler, and every aspect of the state was based on his ideas and work. On the other hand the Soviet Union, while guided in …show more content… Both states used propaganda to control the masses, and both states relied on the ideas of loyalty to something bigger than ones own self. With the Nazis, the trust was earned by exhibiting total loyalty to Hitler; the Soviets entrusted the people to be loyal. (Ironically, it was this inherent expectation to be loyal to the cause, and paranoia that was instilled by Stalin, that created a severely distrustful environment even long past Stalin’s death, as described by Mlynár in his account of the state of the communist party in Soviet Ukraine in the 50’s. )

QualityNazi
 Germany and the Soviet Union could not have been more different
, though they relied on many
 of the same mechanisms to maintain their totalitarian control of power. Nazi
 Germany was a fascist dictator ship, with all decisions coming from the top down. The Soviet Union was a one-party socialist state
, and although its eras in history are marked
 by the president, power rested mostly
 in the hands of the party. Aside from the differences in political structures between Nazi
 Germany and Soviet Russia, each state
 had very
different
 goals in mind upon its construction. Nazi
 Germany existed under the direct orders of Adolf Hitler, and every aspect of the state
was based
 on his ideas
 and work. On the other hand
 the Soviet Union, while guided in …show
 more content…

Both states
used
 propaganda to control the masses, and both states
 relied on the ideas
 of loyalty to something bigger than ones own
 self. With the Nazis
, the trust was earned
 by exhibiting total loyalty to Hitler; the Soviets entrusted the people
 to be loyal. (Ironically
, it was this inherent expectation to be loyal to the cause, and paranoia that was instilled
 by Stalin, that created a severely
 distrustful environment even long past Stalin’s death, as described
 by Mlynár
 in his account of the state
 of the communist party in Soviet Ukraine in the 50’s
. )

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