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I am Anas Arifbhai Multani, DOB: 1st September 1998, permanent resident of Suthar Faliya, Zankhvav Road, Mandvi, Surat Rural-394160, GUJARAT, INDIA. I have applied and accepted in the program of Computer Systems Technology-Networking program at St. Clair College commencing from September- 2022 term, which is one of the reputed publicly funded institutions established in 1966 being the member institute of “Public College” group known for the collaboration of research-intensive polytechnics delivering industry oriented educational curriculums. Family Demographics In my family, my father is currently having his own business. He has always been the great supporter in terms of educational progression which I have always desired to pursue from the childhood. My mother is a home maker, she has nourished me with all the social ethics and moral duties which has helped me to grow as a responsible person. My parents have enough accumulated savings from their last 5 years’ income which would allow me to pursue the studies in Canada including all the living and other educational expenses. Educational Progression Recapitulating my academic progression, I have completed my Secondary School Certificate (S. S. C) with 72. 49% in March-2014. Pursing my Diploma in Computer Engineering from UKA Tarsadia University with scoring 7. 26 CGPA out of 10 on April-2016. During my diploma, I was always curious about studying the Computers aspects as I always used to creatively think and visualize that how these engineering skills are easing our day to day lives as well as leading to information and connectivity revolution. Moreover, these Computer skills are being designed and programmed to perform as per the user requirements. Onwards, as I was certain that I will be pursuing in my higher education, I commenced reviewing and taking advices from professionals those who are already working in this domain since last few years in my friends and family circle, where I found that there are lot of Computer Systems Technology-Networking students who graduate from reputed institutions with credentials during their studies, pupils end up studying only theoretical concepts rather than having industrially aligned syllabus and blended learning. Hence, I decided to pursue the studies abroad and upon considering the institutions and educational system and course delivery at St. Clair College, Windsor. I decided to apply for the Computer Systems Technology-Networking commenced from September-2022. Also, to meet the English language admission criteria, I appeared for the TOEFL examination on 5th July 2021 securing overall 100 (Listening 24, Reading 26, Writing 30 and Speaking 20). Why Canada over India and other Countries? Before firmly deciding whether to pursue the studies in India or abroad, I commenced the search for the programs which would allow me to have practical as well as theoretical blend along with industrial exposure, leading me to have the long-term educational edge in the field of computers, where I reviewed the curriculums offered by the University of Mumbai, Amity University, Savitribai Phule Pune University, Gujarat Technological University, Pandit Deendayal Petroleum University as well as Gujarat University in my region and came to discover that majority of the modules are sharing the similarities and are not being
I am Anas Arifbhai Multani, DOB: 1st September 1998, permanent resident of Suthar Faliya, Zankhvav Road, Mandvi, Surat Rural-394160, GUJARAT, INDIA. I have applied and
accepted
in the program of Computer Systems Technology-Networking program at St. Clair College commencing from September- 2022 term, which is one of the reputed
publicly
funded institutions established in 1966 being the member institute of “Public College” group known for the collaboration of research-intensive polytechnics delivering industry oriented educational curriculums. Family Demographics In my family, my father is
currently
having his
own
business. He has always been the great supporter in terms of educational progression which I have always desired to
pursue
from the childhood. My mother is a home maker, she has nourished me with all the social ethics and moral duties which has
helped
me to grow as a responsible person. My parents have
enough
accumulated savings from their last 5 years’ income which would
allow
me to
pursue
the
studies
in Canada including all the living and other educational expenses. Educational Progression Recapitulating my academic progression, I have completed my Secondary School Certificate (S. S. C) with 72. 49% in March-2014. Pursing my Diploma in Computer Engineering from UKA Tarsadia
University
with scoring 7. 26 CGPA out of 10 on April-2016. During my diploma, I was always curious about studying the Computers aspects as I always
used
to
creatively
think
and visualize that how these engineering
skills
are easing our day to day
lives
as well
as leading to information and connectivity revolution.
Moreover
, these Computer
skills
are
being designed
and programmed to perform as per the user requirements. Onwards, as I was certain that I will be pursuing in my higher education, I commenced reviewing and taking advices from professionals those who are already working in this domain since last few years in my friends and family circle, where I found that there are lot of Computer Systems Technology-Networking students who graduate from reputed institutions with credentials during their
studies
, pupils
end
up studying
only
theoretical concepts
rather
than having
industrially
aligned syllabus and blended learning.
Hence
, I decided to
pursue
the
studies
abroad and upon considering the institutions and educational system and course delivery at St. Clair College, Windsor. I decided to apply for the Computer Systems Technology-Networking commenced from September-2022.
Also
, to
meet
the English language admission criteria, I appeared for the TOEFL examination on 5th July 2021 securing
overall
100 (Listening 24, Reading 26, Writing 30 and Speaking 20). Why Canada over India and other Countries?
Before
firmly
deciding whether to
pursue
the
studies
in India or abroad, I commenced the search for the programs which would
allow
me to have practical
as well
as theoretical blend along with industrial exposure, leading me to have the long-term educational edge in the field of computers, where I reviewed the curriculums offered by the
University
of Mumbai, Amity
University
, Savitribai Phule Pune University, Gujarat Technological
University
, Pandit Deendayal Petroleum
University
as well
as Gujarat
University
in my region and came to discover that majority of the modules are sharing the similarities and are not being
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