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Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. nObDo
In modern era, people like to make their children more confident and full active. such as reading books and doing other activites. i belive bring pupils and parents togather but reading is not about wasting time its gives large knowledge on studies, yet it can give information on other activites? I agree that better to spend some time on other useful sports and culural programs. one the downside, I would argue that reading not a wasting time, despite parents has some other thoughts about their childern its fact. for intstance: Nowadays children would like stay at home rather than outside because of their schools and class rooms are very conjucted even i have not seen at least some space to play games, I saw this situation lastime in some citys. so that pupil happy to stay at house and infront of the computer to play artificial games. This kind of environment may leads to negative impact on students. one the other hand, I belive that children needs to aware of all kind of programs and sports and culural activites. People has to take obligations regarding of thire pupil, as well as teachers to know them useful data about different religeon dresing style and history stories and playing games. if we can train like wise they would get amount of intrest on those events. In my view, we have to feed to our childern, how spend time on work and other accassions. In colusion, children has to grow in all, espacially not only in learning. study gives some skills which related phycical but if you can participate social and other latest events, it can increase your mental ability skill.
In modern era,
people
like to
make
their
children
more confident and full active.
such
as reading books and doing
other
activites
.
i
belive
bring pupils and parents
togather
but
reading is not about wasting
time
its gives large knowledge on studies,
yet
it can give information on
other
activites
? I
agree
that better to spend
some
time
on
other
useful sports and
culural
programs.
one
the downside, I would argue that reading not a wasting
time
, despite parents has
some
other
thoughts about their
childern
its fact.
for
intstance
:
Nowadays
children
would
like stay
at home
rather
than outside
because
of their schools and
class rooms
are
very
conjucted
even
i
have not
seen
at least
some
space to play games, I
saw
this situation
lastime
in
some
citys
.
so
that pupil happy to stay at
house
and
infront
of the computer to play artificial games. This kind of environment may
leads
to
negative
impact on students.
one
the
other
hand,
I belive
that
children
needs to
aware
of all kind of programs and sports and
culural
activites
.
People
has
to take obligations regarding of
thire
pupil,
as well
as teachers to know them useful data about
different
religeon
dresing
style and history stories and playing games.
if
we can train like wise they would
get
amount of
intrest
on those
events
. In my view, we
have to
feed to our
childern
, how spend
time
on work and
other
accassions
. In
colusion
,
children
has to
grow in all,
espacially
not
only
in learning.
study
gives
some
skills
which related
phycical
but
if you can participate social and
other
latest
events
, it can increase your mental ability
skill
.
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