Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids.   Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids.  QMx73
People have differing views about whether preschool children should be taken care of in childcare centers as they can provide abundant and best quality facilities, while others stand their ground that it will be better if children are looked after by their family members. Although it can be argued from both sides, I am of the opinion that parents should send their kids to reliable childcare companies or kindergartens.
On one side of the argument, there are working parents who believe that related members provide better careers for infants. The first main reason should be mentioned is that related people such as grandparents always give the greatest love for kids. Every mistake or achievement in children's life will be improved and recognized by members' kindness. Therefore, the personality trait of kids not only developed in pessimistic ways but also more completed. On the other hand, living with close members brings infants the most active life – style, remarkably. As children feel more comfortable so their potential abilities can be discovered and developed. Moreover, their weakness significantly can be eradicated and strength can be strengthened because kids are more self- confident in showing their characteristics without worrying about others.
I would be inclined to argue against this as I believe that childcare centers provide the best facilities and education for preschool aged infants. Firstly, plenty of childcare company chains now are equipped with the most modern devices such as televisions, computers and play gardens. Therefore, kids not only can enhance their physical but also sentimental strength. Furthermore, pupils will be more thought- provoking and intellectual when adding more friend relationships in the community. On the other hand, in the public environment, pupils can gain various practical skills such as: independent or communication skills. Due to the fact that children have to make efforts not to be worse in lots of operations and curriculums. Therefore, kids will be more mature as their age and know how to appreciate their own things.
Nevertheless, I maintain my original position that parents should send their kids to reliable childcare companies or kindergartens. As they can gain abundant practical skills and more mature in their way of thinking, significantly
People
 have differing views about whether preschool 
children
 should 
be taken
 care of in childcare centers as they can provide abundant and best quality facilities, while others stand their ground that it will be better if 
children
 are looked
 after by their family members. Although it can 
be argued
 from both sides, I am of the opinion that parents should 
send
 their 
kids
 to reliable childcare 
companies
 or kindergartens.
On one side of the argument, there are working parents who believe that related members provide better careers for infants. The 
first
 main reason should 
be mentioned
 is that related 
people
 such as grandparents always give the greatest 
love
 for 
kids
. Every mistake or achievement in children's life will be 
improved
 and recognized by members' kindness. 
Therefore
, the personality trait of 
kids
 not 
only
 developed in pessimistic ways 
but
 also
 more completed. 
On the other hand
, living with close members brings infants the most active life 
–
 style, 
remarkably
. As 
children
 feel more comfortable 
so
 their potential abilities can 
be discovered
 and developed. 
Moreover
, their weakness 
significantly
 can 
be eradicated
 and strength can 
be strengthened
 because
 kids
 are more self- confident in showing their characteristics without worrying about others.
I would 
be inclined
 to argue against this as I believe that childcare centers provide the best facilities and education for preschool aged infants. 
Firstly
, 
plenty
 of childcare 
company
 chains 
now
 are equipped
 with the most modern devices such as televisions, computers and play gardens. 
Therefore
, 
kids
 not 
only
 can enhance their physical 
but
 also
 sentimental strength. 
Furthermore
, pupils will be more 
thought
- provoking and intellectual when adding more friend relationships in the community. 
On the other hand
, in the public environment, pupils can gain various practical 
skills
 such as: independent or communication 
skills
. Due to the fact that 
children
 have to
 make
 efforts not to be worse in lots of operations and curriculums. 
Therefore
, 
kids
 will be more mature as their age and know how to appreciate their 
own
 things.
Nevertheless
, I maintain my original position that parents should 
send
 their 
kids
 to reliable childcare 
companies
 or kindergartens. As they can gain abundant practical 
skills
 and more mature in their way of thinking, 
significantly
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