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Some people say that person has recommended to me tomorrow morning at the hospital right to the situation of Bangladesh and the best brother in law and

Some people say that person has recommended to me tomorrow morning at the hospital right to the situation of Bangladesh and the best brother in law and Mkn9k
INTRODUCTION I belong to a close-knit family including me, my parents and my sister, and my two elder brothers. My father helps to support the family by owning a well-established business in the food industry in New Delhi, India for more than two decades, while my mother is a homemaker. My sister serves as a police officer in Karnal, Haryana.  I completed my Class 10th from Govt high school, JIND, affiliation with the HBSE (Haryana Board of School Education) in India in the year of 2018 with second division. I took humanities stream and completed my 12th from JAT SR SEC SCHOOL, JIND with 75% in the year 2020. I have written IELTS with an overall 6. 5 with no modules less than 6. Why Broadcasting - Radio and Media Production? Since class 12th, I have been doing many freelance works related to Media and Marketing. To be honest, during my school period, my teachers used to announce my name first in order to deliver a speech in school functions about social development. Because, I had always keen interest in public administration subject. Thats why I achieved highest score in this subject as compared to rest of subjects in my 12th standard. My teachers wanted me to be a leader because of my personality and stage confidence. Apart from that I have been improving my skill in graphic designing program for couple of years. I also run a YouTube channel where I upload music videos, which I create by adding high level of VFX and other unique features. One day an Indian prominent movie director S. S Rajamouli sir inspired me by releasing a blockbuster movie of the year (Bahubali). I wanted to follow his footsteps. Since then, I was interested in Media by watching many films and wanted to see how these kinds of incredible movies are being produced, edited, and displayed in cinemas. Knowingly, India is a huge market for media and production and our society is more dependent on movies for entertainment. Hence, after class 12th, I decided to go for the Radio and Media production course to understand the insight into Radio and Media Production which is highly in demand in India. Media production is the art of visual storytelling through film and sound where students learn the foundational skills of shooting, producing, and editing video, as well as the basics of lighting and sound production. This program is perfectly designed to fulfil all the requirements of a well-designed course that caters to such a specific niche: hands-on training opportunities, state-of-the-art facilities, broad curricula, flexible course structures, practical and progressive courses such as Digital Media Entrepreneurship, Research, Writing and Interviewing, Crafting an Online Presence, Creative Imagery, etc. This course will teach me technical skills such as photography, writing, social media, videography, etc. which are in great demand in all the sectors thus, providing me with the extensive knowledge and skills required to become an expert in the future. This course will not only awaken my creative juices but will also allow me to develop a solid foundation of theory along with workshops that will help me develop technical know-how in setting up a home studio, shooting and editing high-quality video content, writing engaging copy and performing on and off camera with confident. Doing this course will help me to work behind the camera producing a variety of films and shows, including narratives, documentaries, live sports, news, commercials, and promotions, Write, produce, shoot and edit video content that will be aired throughout the region or shown at film festivals. Fanshawe Broadcasting - Radio and Media Production program is a highly concentrated hands-on approach to training students for careers in radio broadcasting and emerging broadcast media. Students operate three broadcast properties, which are equipped with the latest in broadcast technology. Radio Programming, Communications for Media and Radio Sales & Promotion, etc. will support me in having insight and knowledge of this program. It is ranked amongst the top post-secondary institutions for its quality of education, student satisfaction level, cultural diversity, and career avenues. Having more than 200 diverse programs, with co-op education facilities including exchanges with sports and recreational activities has given me an edge over any other institution. I want to take up this program and study in a country like Canada thats multi-cultural, inclusive, and has a dynamic, innovative, and challenging educational environment. Canada is consistently named as a peaceful country in terms of living and having impressive health care facilities it became my top choice. Moreover, Canada is a bilingual country, which makes studying here an excellent opportunity to develop your language skills and boost prospects for an interesting career. I firmly believe that Canada is the next step toward my career development and is the perfect avenue for me to achieve more in my professional career and make me a globally competitive graduate with international exposure. Financial capabilities I have paid CAD 18, 553. 74 as the program fees and CAD 10, 000. 01 as a GIC amount in CIBC Bank Canada. My family annual income is approximately 22lakhs. hence, my family is financially capable to support my further stay and study in Canada. Future Prospects After completing this course in Canada there will be plenty of opportunities for me to work as a videographer, social media specialist, blogger and a movie director in India. Because India is well known to have the second largest TV market in the world. I would truly love being in front of a camera because that is what makes me happy. I would also be able to gain considerable practice, research, and professional knowledge. This course will open the gateway to opportunities in diverse fields such as dynamic media development, photography, videography, content management, etc. In India, the rapid growth of OTT channels increased emphasis on animated intellectual property IP content and larger investment in VFX studios in both domestic and international markets. Hence,  after successful completion of the program, I would return to India and being an obedient son, I would love to take care of my sweet parents and fulfil my desire by working for a reputed company as well as would like to add some new spicy flavours in Indian entertainment industry. I strongly believe that my knowledge of Radio and film production will help me to develop the necessary skills to carry out innovative solutions which will help me attract the relevant audience and will enable me a head start in my countrys major companies like Pin storm, WA Consultant, Chegg India, Byte Dance, Web Chutney or in other corporations like McKinsey & Company, Boston Consulting Group, Accenture,  etc. as a Communications & Media Specialist, Content Strategist, Specialist, Media Planner, Social Media Manager, Brand Identity Designer,  etc
INTRODUCTION I belong to a close-knit
family
including me, my parents and my sister, and my two elder brothers. My father
helps
to support the
family
by owning a well-established business in the food industry in New Delhi, India for more than two decades, while my mother is a homemaker. My sister serves as a police officer in
Karnal
, Haryana.  I completed my
Class
10th from Govt high
school
,
JIND
, affiliation with the
HBSE
(Haryana Board of
School
Education) in India in the
year
of 2018 with second division. I took humanities stream and completed my 12th from
JAT
SR SEC
SCHOOL
,
JIND
 with 75% in the
year
2020.
I
have written IELTS with an
overall
6. 5 with no modules less than 6. Why Broadcasting
-
Radio
and
Media
Production? Since
class
12th, I have been doing
many
freelance works related to
Media
and Marketing. To be honest, during my
school
period, my teachers
used
to announce my name
first
in order to deliver a speech in
school
functions about
social
development.
Because
, I had always keen interest in public administration subject.
Thats
why I achieved
highest
score in this subject as compared to rest of subjects in my 12th standard. My teachers wanted me to be a leader
because
of my personality and stage confidence. Apart from that I have been improving my
skill
in graphic designing
program
for
couple of
years. I
also
run a YouTube channel where I upload music
videos
, which I create by adding high level of VFX and other unique features. One day an Indian prominent
movie
director S. S
Rajamouli
sir inspired me by releasing a blockbuster
movie
of the
year
(
Bahubali
). I wanted to follow his footsteps. Since then, I
was interested
in
Media
by watching
many
films and wanted to
see
how these kinds of incredible
movies
are
being produced
, edited, and displayed in cinemas.
Knowingly
, India is a huge market for
media
and
production
and our society is more dependent on
movies
for entertainment.
Hence
, after
class
12th, I decided to go for the
Radio
and
Media
production
course
to understand the insight into
Radio
and
Media
Production
which is
highly
in demand in India.
Media
production
is the art of visual storytelling through film and sound where
students
learn the foundational
skills
of shooting, producing, and editing
video
,
as well
as the basics of lighting and sound production. This
program
is
perfectly
designed to fulfil all the requirements of a well-designed
course
that caters to such a specific niche: hands-on training
opportunities
, state-of-the-art facilities, broad curricula, flexible
course
structures, practical and progressive
courses
such as Digital
Media
Entrepreneurship, Research, Writing and Interviewing, Crafting an Online Presence, Creative Imagery, etc. This
course
will teach me technical
skills
such as photography, writing,
social
media
, videography, etc. which are in great demand in all the sectors
thus
, providing me with the extensive
knowledge
and
skills
required to become an expert in the future.
This
course
will not
only
awaken my creative juices
but
will
also
allow
me to
develop
a solid foundation of theory along with workshops that will
help
me
develop
technical know-how in setting up a home studio, shooting and editing high-quality
video
content
, writing engaging copy and performing on and off camera with confident. Doing this
course
will
help
me to work behind the camera producing a variety of films and
shows
, including narratives, documentaries,
live
sports, news, commercials, and promotions, Write, produce, shoot and edit
video
content
that will
be aired
throughout the region or shown at film festivals.
Fanshawe
Broadcasting
-
Radio
and
Media
Production
program
is a
highly
concentrated hands-on approach to training
students
for
careers
in
radio
broadcasting and emerging broadcast
media
.
Students
operate three broadcast properties, which
are equipped
with the latest in broadcast technology.
Radio
Programming, Communications for
Media
and
Radio
Sales & Promotion, etc. will support me in having insight and
knowledge
of this
program
. It
is ranked
amongst the top post-secondary institutions for its quality of education,
student
satisfaction level, cultural diversity, and
career
avenues. Having more than 200 diverse
programs
, with co-op education facilities including exchanges with sports and recreational activities has
given
me an edge over any other institution. I want to take up this
program
and study in a
country
like Canada
thats
multi-cultural, inclusive, and has a dynamic, innovative, and challenging educational environment. Canada is
consistently
named as a peaceful
country
in terms of living and having impressive health care facilities it became my top choice.
Moreover
, Canada is a bilingual
country
, which
makes
studying here an excellent
opportunity
to
develop
your language
skills
and boost prospects for an interesting
career
. I
firmly
believe that Canada is the
next
step toward my
career
development and is the perfect avenue for me to achieve more in my professional
career
and
make
me a globally competitive graduate with international exposure. Financial capabilities I have paid CAD 18, 553. 74 as the
program
fees and CAD 10, 000. 01 as a
GIC
amount in CIBC Bank Canada. My
family
annual income is approximately 22lakhs.
hence
, my
family
is
financially
capable to support my
further
stay and study in Canada. Future Prospects After completing this
course
in Canada there will be
plenty
of
opportunities
for me to work as a videographer,
social
media
specialist, blogger and a
movie
director in India.
Because
India is well known to have the
second largest
TV market in the world. I would
truly
love
being in front of a camera
because
that is
what
makes
me happy. I would
also
be able to gain considerable practice, research, and professional
knowledge
. This
course
will open the gateway to
opportunities
in diverse fields such as dynamic
media
development, photography, videography,
content
management, etc. In India, the rapid growth of
OTT
channels increased emphasis on animated intellectual property IP
content
and larger investment in VFX studios in both domestic and international markets.
Hence
,
 
after successful completion of the
program
, I would return to India and being an obedient son, I would
love
to take care of my sweet parents and fulfil my desire by working for a reputed
company
as well
as would like to
add
some
new spicy
flavours
 in Indian entertainment industry. I
strongly
believe that my
knowledge
of
Radio
and film
production
will
help
me to
develop
the necessary
skills
to carry out innovative solutions which will
help
me attract the relevant audience and will enable me a head
start
in my
countrys
major
companies
like Pin storm, WA Consultant, Chegg India, Byte Dance, Web Chutney or in other corporations like McKinsey &
Company
, Boston Consulting Group, Accenture,
 
etc. as a Communications &
Media
Specialist,
Content
Strategist, Specialist,
Media
Planner,
Social
Media
Manager, Brand Identity Designer,
 
etc
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