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Some people think that teachers and educational professionals should make all of the important decisions about what subjects are taught in schools. Others think that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions.

Some people think that teachers and educational professionals should make all of the important decisions about what subjects are taught in schools. Others think that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions. G2Vbw
There has been no shortage of opinion on selecting the subjects taught in schools as it should be selected by educational professionals or by industry experts. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely go on with the business or industry expert to build the curriculum of schools. It is my firm belief that choosing industry experts for selecting the subjects in schools will be beneficial for student's future for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs. To begin with industry leaders knows current market requirement for fresher. They know which skills are currently required by which industry and this knowledge can help to design a course in a way which can make students industry ready. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been strongly influenced by my own personal experience. For example, in my school there was not a subject of computer and I was very much interested in studying more about it because seeing the current IT industry booming the market and my interest in that field. As a result, I had to opt for other subjects and when I had started my undergraduate study, I find quite difficult in starting to be in pace, as I was lacking some basic knowledge of computer field. For this reason, if any industry experts would have chosen subjects, then they definitely would selected computer as one of the core subject which could be helpful for the students seeking future in that domain. Secondly, teacher and education professionals tend to think in way when they were taught subjects and make choices of a subjects by keeping in mind what was taught to them. Now, in this modern world we can see new innovation happing at much faster face so, what they might had been taught in school will be outdated by this time and it could not benefit students. Drawing to my personal experience, the computer textbook back in my school days was printed around five years back from that time. In the world of technology five year is much wider gap so, I would have been taught of the software that were been outdated by the time I clear my school. Moreover, studying outdated things can only leads to wastage of time and resources. It's certainly clear to see why an industry expert would be helpful to design the course structure. Now, one can take issue with this claim by contending that teachers have professional experience of what to taught in class so, they would have better understanding of selecting course which covers all the expect of course. This can be true up to some extent but, their lack of knowledge on what current market demand and impact the whole career of students and covering all the criteria of course in cost of not delivering main skills to students is not feasible option. In the light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that selection of course by industry and business experts can provide the much needed expect to the student's education and draw a student to right path of success. Teacher and industry experts together working around of selection of subject can also lead to solving the problem of covering all criteria and also keeping main skills required in market to that subject.
There has been no shortage of opinion on selecting the
subjects
taught in
schools
as it should
be selected
by educational professionals or by
industry
experts
. If I
were forced
to choose, I would definitely go on with the business or
industry
expert
to build the curriculum of
schools
. It is my firm belief that choosing
industry
experts
for selecting the
subjects
in
schools
will be beneficial for student's future for a number of reasons, and I will develop these
ideas
in the subsequent paragraphs. To
begin
with
industry
leaders knows
current
market
requirement for fresher. They know which
skills
are
currently
required by which
industry
and this knowledge can
help
to design a
course
in a way which can
make
students
industry
ready. I
have to
admit that my opinion on this matter has been
strongly
influenced by my
own
personal experience.
For example
, in my
school
there was not a
subject
of computer
and
I was
very
much
interested in studying more about it
because
seeing the
current
IT
industry
booming the
market
and my interest in that field.
As a result
, I had to opt for other
subjects
and when I had
started
my undergraduate study, I find quite difficult in starting to be in pace, as I was lacking
some
basic knowledge of computer field.
For this reason
, if any
industry
experts
would have chosen
subjects
, then they definitely would
selected
computer as one of the core
subject
which could be helpful for the
students
seeking future in that domain.
Secondly
, teacher and education professionals tend to
think
in way when they
were taught
subjects
and
make
choices of a
subjects
by keeping in mind what
was taught
to them.
Now
, in this modern world we can
see
new innovation
happing
at
much
faster face
so
, what they might
had
been taught
in
school
will
be outdated
by this
time
and
it could not benefit
students
. Drawing to my personal experience, the computer textbook back in my
school
days
was printed
around five years back from that
time
. In the world of technology five year is
much
wider gap
so
, I would have
been taught
of the software that
were been
outdated by the
time
I
clear
my
school
.
Moreover
, studying outdated things can
only
leads to wastage of
time
and resources. It's
certainly
clear
to
see
why an
industry
expert
would be helpful to design the
course
structure.
Now
, one can take issue with this claim by contending that teachers have professional experience of what
to taught
in
class
so
, they would have better understanding of selecting
course
which covers all the
expect
of
course
. This can be true up to
some
extent
but
, their lack of knowledge on what
current
market
demand and impact the whole career of
students
and covering all the criteria of
course
in cost of not delivering main
skills
to
students
is not feasible option. In the light of the reasons mentioned, I
strongly
believe that selection of
course
by
industry
and business
experts
can provide the
much
needed
expect
to the student's education and draw a
student
to right path of success. Teacher and
industry
experts
together working around of selection of
subject
can
also
lead to solving the problem of covering all criteria and
also
keeping main
skills
required in
market
to that
subject
.
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