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Lookut his color. " The members of the family looked at the earth again in shame. "Fried dough, " Ma said. "One month we been here. An' Tom had five days' work. An' the rest of you scrabblin' out ever' day, an' no work. An' scairt to talk. An' the money gone. You're scairt to talk it out. Ever' night you jes' eat, then you get wanderin' away. Can't bear to talk it out. Well, you got to. Rosasharn ain't far from due, an' lookut her color. You got to talk it out. Now don't none of you get up till we figger somepin out. One day' more grease an' two days' flour, an' ten potatoes. You set here an' get busy! " They looked at the ground. Pa cleaned his thick nails with his pocket knife. Uncle John picked at a splinter on the box he sat on. Tom pinched his lower lip and pulled it away from his teeth. He released his lip and said softly, "We been a-lookin', Ma. Been walkin' out sence we can't use the gas no more. Been goin' in ever' gate, walkin' up to ever' house, even when we knowed they wasn't gonna be nothin'. Puts a weight on ya. Goin' out lookin' for somepin you know you ain't gonna find. " Ma said fiercely, "You ain't got the right to get discouraged. This here fambly's goin' under. You jus' ain't got the right. " Pa inspected his scraped nail. "We gotta go, " he said. "We didn' wanta go. It's nice here, an' folks is nice here. We're feared we'll have to go live in one a them Hoovervilles. " "Well, if we got to, we got to. First thing is, we got to eat. " Al broke in. "I got a tankful a gas in the truck. I didn' let nobody get into that. " Tom smiled. "This here Al got a lot of sense along with he's randy-pandy. " "Now you figger, " Ma said. "I ain't watchin' this here fambly starve no more. One day' more grease. That's what we got. Come time for Rosasharn to lay in, she got to be fed up. You figger! " "This here hot water an' toilets—" Pa began. "Well, we can't eat no toilets. " Tom said, "They was a fella come by today lookin' for men to go to Marysville. Pickin' fruit. " "Well, why don' we go to Marysville? " Ma demanded. "I dunno, " said Tom. "Didn' seem right, somehow. He was so an
Lookut
his color. " The members of the family looked at the earth again in shame. "Fried dough,
"
Ma said. "One month we
been
here. An' Tom had five days' work. An' the rest of you
scrabblin
' out
ever'
day, an' no work. An'
scairt
to
talk
. An' the money gone. You're
scairt
to
talk
it out.
Ever
' night you
jes
' eat, then you
get
wanderin
' away. Can't bear to
talk
it out.
Well
, you
got
to.
Rosasharn
ain't far from due, an'
lookut
her color. You
got
to
talk
it out.
Now
don't none of you
get
up till we
figger
somepin
out. One day' more grease an' two days' flour, an' ten potatoes. You set here an'
get
busy! " They looked at the ground. Pa cleaned his thick nails with his pocket knife. Uncle John picked at a splinter on the box he sat on. Tom pinched his lower lip and pulled it away from his teeth. He released his lip and said
softly
, "We
been
a-lookin
', Ma. Been
walkin
' out
sence
we can't
use
the gas no more. Been
goin
' in
ever'
gate,
walkin
' up to
ever'
house
, even when we
knowed
they
was
n't
gonna
be
nothin
'. Puts a weight on ya.
Goin
' out
lookin
' for
somepin
you know you ain't
gonna
find. " Ma said
fiercely
, "You ain't
got
the right to
get
discouraged. This here
fambly
's
goin
' under. You
jus
' ain't
got
the right. " Pa inspected his scraped nail. "We
gotta
go,
"
he said. "We
didn'
wanta go
. It's nice here, an' folks is nice here. We're feared we'll
have to
go
live
in one
a them
Hoovervilles
. "
"Well
, if we
got
to, we
got
to.
First
thing is, we
got
to eat. " Al broke in. "I
got
a tankful a gas in the truck. I
didn'
let
nobody
get
into that. " Tom smiled. "This here Al
got
a lot of
sense along with he's
randy-pandy
. " "
Now
you
figger
,
"
Ma said. "I ain't
watchin
' this here
fambly
starve no more. One day' more grease. That's what we
got
.
Come
time for
Rosasharn
to lay in, she
got
to
be fed
up. You
figger
! " "This here hot water an' toilets—" Pa began.
"Well
, we
can't eat no
toilets. " Tom said, "They
was
a fella
come
by
today
lookin
' for
men
to go to Marysville.
Pickin
' fruit. "
"Well
, why
don'
we go to Marysville? " Ma demanded. "I
dunno
,
"
said Tom. "
Didn'
seem right, somehow. He was
so
an
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