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Write about the following topic. Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience E9XGL
It is said that working for a company or a corporation is prevalent in the modern society, taking risk to start their own business is another option for people who are adventurous and have a desire to be rich. Although founding their own company has a great deal of merits, in my opinion, its drawbacks are more significant. On the one hand, people who start their own business can have money in the short time and freely organize their own company according to their desire. To begin with, people might have capitals to invest heavily in their company if their project can persuade their customers about the interest and profits which is bring to the pocket of investors. For example, Jeff Beros is a billionaire who had found Amazon had a reckless intent is that he quit his job to start his own business and currently he is a richest person in the world. Secondly, people can develop their management and communication skills. This is because they is a highest position in their own company, they have to allocate missions to their employees and communicate with their workers by the meetings or emails. On the other hand, working for a company could bring to people stable salaries and avoid failing if they start their own business. In the first place, those who work for a company might be financially stable and accumulate their own experiences about their jobs. As a result, they can have a new occupation with a high-paid salary if they have adequately knowledge and experiences about their profession. In addition, in worst case of starting their own business, if their organization is not run smoothly and failed, they have a huge debt which is resulted in their risk. To put it another word, people who work for a company if their company become insolvent because of any reasons, they can have a spare money which is originated from their unemployment insurance. In conclusion, despite some of the plus points mentioned above, I believe working for a company is an optimal choice that have numerous benefits to take instead of starting own business which has abundant risks.
It
is said
that working for a
company
or a corporation is prevalent in the modern society, taking
risk
to
start
their
own
business
is another option for
people
who
are adventurous and have a desire to be rich. Although founding their
own
company
has a great deal of merits, in my opinion, its drawbacks are more significant. On the one hand,
people
who
start
their
own
business
can have money in the short time and
freely
organize their
own
company
according to their desire. To
begin
with,
people
might have capitals to invest
heavily
in their
company
if their project can persuade their customers about the interest and profits which is
bring
to the pocket of investors.
For example
, Jeff
Beros
is a billionaire
who
had found Amazon had a reckless intent is that he quit his job to
start
his
own
business
and
currently
he is
a
richest person in the world.
Secondly
,
people
can develop their management and communication
skills
. This is
because
they
is
a
highest position in their
own
company
, they
have to
allocate missions to their employees and communicate with their workers by the meetings or emails.
On the other hand
, working for a
company
could bring to
people
stable salaries and avoid failing if they
start
their
own
business
. In the
first
place, those
who
work for a
company
might be
financially
stable and accumulate their
own
experiences about their jobs.
As a result
, they can have a new occupation with a high-paid salary if they have
adequately
knowledge and experiences about their profession.
In addition
, in
worst
case of starting their
own
business
, if their organization is not run
smoothly
and failed, they have a huge debt which
is resulted
in their
risk
. To put it another word,
people
who
work for a
company
if their
company
become insolvent
because
of any reasons, they can have a spare money which
is originated
from their unemployment insurance.
In conclusion
, despite
some of the
plus points mentioned above, I believe working for a
company
is an optimal choice that have numerous benefits to take
instead
of starting
own
business
which has abundant
risks
.
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