It is true that nowadays people in industrialized nations can expect to live longer
than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative
consequences to this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential
problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed co...
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Hi. I am a new customer. I would like to
buy
a machine for my kitchen for my sister. One of my friends recommended this shop to me. But
I do not exactly know whether the electronical
good
I want
to order is sold
at this shop or not. Please
, let
me know. I will be glad, if you write to me about current
prices and make
a clarification. I can afford between 100 -250 USD. I
hope they are not costy
. Could I buy
the good
that I eagerly
want
in a short period of time? The reason why I want
to buy
it as soon
as possible is that my sister is currently
living in another town and I have to
send
it to her on her birthday. In addition
, I would like to buy
the latest version of Samsung A50 for myself. I am interested
in its prices as well
. Could you please
let
me know the qualities of this mobile phone? The first
and foremost, I want have
a good
and high quality camera in order to take different
landscapes. I will be happy, if the device has an excellent storage. I was not satisfied with my late mobile phone's qualities and functions. Hopefully
, this one will be good
enough
. Thanks in advance. I am waiting for your reply. Do not write below this line
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