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When the World Witnessed a Logical Love

When the World Witnessed a Logical Love KDVWL
It was a late-night conversation between two old lovers who didn't know they were in love for 10 long years. Her feeling was so stubborn to be brushed under the carpet, it was craving an acknowledgment. So, she decided to give it a try, to admit her purest feeling, to not die with a regret of not letting him know. She wrote it in simple words, and he got shocked and told her: ''Let's talk on the phone''. And that was his most mature approach, to not carry on the conversation about this intense and important feeling by texting, he knew most of its authenticity will be lost by the limitation of words and emojis, it's the voice that delivers the feeling accurately, it's the breaths, the silence in between, the words that flow from mouth instantly, the unavailability of ''backspace'' button, that makes the conversation highly encouraged in vital topics. The conversation was about love, but the lack of emotional words made it unique. Their maturity level escalated rapidly in the past few years which made the conversation "a logical discussion''. It included a discussion about the pros and cons of the relationship, what it may lead to, parents' reactions, and above all, how to establish it in real life. After the conversation that lasted for hours, they concluded to give their love a go, to initiate what they called ''a mature love''. The most jaw-dropping part was, that the whole conversation didn't include the most common three words the lovers say ''I Love You'', and that too plays the role of making this conversation unique. They ended the conversation, she wrote the date down in her phone notes. They carried on doing their daily life tasks without completely realizing what just had happened. Soon after, as the days went by, they started to witness the intensity of this feeling, the astonishment it held. The discovery of the perfect lover made them insanely amazed. They were scolding themselves for not taking this decision in the last few years, but they also believed in timing, that all those years were preparing them for this moment, was building their strength to fight for each other, to make this work. And the world witnessed the beginning of the most logical love story, the affinity which is meant to be lived, nurtured, until death makes them apart, yet again in the hereafter.
It was a late-night
conversation
between two
old
lovers who didn't know they were in
love
for 10 long years. Her
feeling
was
so
stubborn to
be brushed
under the carpet, it was craving an acknowledgment.
So
, she decided to give it a try, to admit her purest
feeling
, to not
die
with a regret of not letting him know. She wrote it in simple words, and he
got
shocked and
told
her: ''
Let
's talk on the phone''. And that was his most mature approach, to not carry on the
conversation
about this intense and
important
feeling
by texting, he knew most of its authenticity will
be lost
by the limitation of words and emojis, it's the voice that delivers the
feeling
accurately
, it's the breaths, the silence in between, the words that flow from mouth
instantly
, the unavailability of ''backspace'' button, that
makes
the
conversation
highly
encouraged in vital topics. The
conversation
was about
love
,
but
the lack of emotional words made it unique. Their maturity level escalated
rapidly
in the past few years which made the
conversation
"
a logical discussion''. It included a discussion about the pros and cons of the relationship, what it may lead to, parents' reactions, and
above all
, how to establish it in real life. After the
conversation
that lasted for hours, they concluded to give their
love
a go, to initiate what they called ''a mature
love
''. The most jaw-dropping part was, that the whole
conversation
didn't include the most common three words the lovers say ''I
Love
You'', and that too plays the role of making this
conversation
unique. They ended the
conversation
, she wrote the date down in her phone notes. They carried on doing their daily life tasks without completely realizing what
just
had happened.
Soon
after, as the days went by, they
started
to witness the intensity of this
feeling
, the astonishment it held. The discovery of the perfect lover made them
insanely
amazed. They were scolding themselves for not taking this decision in the last few years,
but
they
also
believed in timing, that all those years were preparing them for this moment, was building their strength to fight for each other, to
make
this work. And the world witnessed the beginning of the most logical
love
story, the affinity which
is meant
to be
lived
, nurtured, until death
makes
them apart,
yet
again in the hereafter.
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