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Psychology Message for Parents to Their Child

Psychology Message for Parents to Their Child p59

Some of the parents told their children to get what they want with hard work and give the best. This is maybe usually taught by them to give confidence in every step to achieve their dream. But if we look again, in some cases maybe they don't real confidence or translate the real message. Of course, this message can have a positive impact on children. They have a lot of hopes and dreams in their development. The enthusiasm to reach the dreams given by parents can give children the courage to work hard and stay positive. Maybe it is not only related to dreams, in everyday life children are able to solve even complicated problems. In the other hand, one issue that arises when children work hard to accomplish anything is that they believe that something we can achieve is illegal in their culture. They can do whatever they want as long as they use their thoughts to perform. As a result, parents should teach their children to distinguish between what they can do and what they can't because of prohibition. Another problem that can arise is that children lose self-confidence as a result of their increased attempts without the assistance of society or their parents. For example, students who put forth a lot of effort to perform in a useful manner but fail after numerous attempts consider isolated and become dependable. In conclusion, while this practice is beneficial to children's behavioral wellbeing, parents cannot overlook its significant risks. Both successes and shortcomings should be discussed with children.

Some of the
parents
told
 their children
 to get
 what they want with hard
 work and give the best. This is maybe usually
 taught by them to give confidence in every step to achieve their dream
. But
 if we look again, in some
 cases maybe they don't real confidence or translate the real message.

Of course
, this message can have a positive
 impact on children
. They have a lot of
 hopes and dreams
 in their development. The enthusiasm to reach the dreams
given
 by parents
 can give children
 the courage to work hard
 and stay positive
. Maybe it is not only
 related to dreams
, in everyday life children
 are able to solve even complicated problems.

In the other hand, one issue that arises when children
 work hard
 to accomplish anything is that they believe that something we can achieve is illegal in their culture. They can do whatever they want as long as they use
 their thoughts to perform. As a result
, parents
 should teach their children
 to distinguish between what they can do and what they can't because
 of prohibition.

Another problem that can arise is that children
 lose self-confidence as a result
 of their increased attempts without the assistance of society or their parents
. For example
, students who put forth a lot of
 effort to perform in a useful manner
but
 fail after numerous attempts consider
 isolated and become dependable.

In conclusion
, while this practice is beneficial to children's behavioral wellbeing
, parents
 cannot overlook its significant risks
. Both successes and shortcomings should be discussed
 with children
. 

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