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Production of cocoa powder

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Given diagram depicts the various stages in production process of cocoa powder from tree to the final product. Overall, it can be clearly seen that this production process is consists of many stages, if any of the steps missed all the remaining process will be Haunted. To begin with, in the first test cocoa ports are grown on the trees it takes between 80 to 40 years. In the next step the pods were harvested each of them contains 2250 beans. After that the beans were put into the wooden container for few weeks. Then the beans were dry under the sunlight after spreading on the table. In the next step all the good and bad con pins were sorted and good beans for packed into the secks. And the sacks were shipped to exports for the father manufacturing to the manufacturers. And it further divided into various quality of powders. And that cocoa powder is used for the various confectionery items like cakes biscuits etc.
Given
diagram depicts the various stages in production process of cocoa powder from tree to the final product.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
that this production process is consists of
many
stages, if any of the steps missed all the remaining process will
be Haunted
. To
begin
with, in the
first
test
cocoa ports
are grown
on the trees it takes between 80 to 40 years. In the
next
step the pods
were harvested
each of them contains 2250
beans
. After that the
beans
were put
into the wooden container for few weeks. Then the
beans
were dry under the sunlight after spreading on the table. In the
next
step all the
good
and
bad
con pins
were sorted
and
good
beans
for packed into the secks. And the sacks
were shipped
to exports for the father manufacturing to the manufacturers. And it
further
divided into various quality of powders. And that cocoa powder is
used
for the various confectionery items like cakes biscuits etc.
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