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PRODUCTION: Many people argue that traditions represent our roots and continuity with our past, and should be maintained intact, while others think that traditions should adapt to change and circumstance. Discuss the quotation-see mock 7-in a 300-word essay.

PRODUCTION: Many people argue that traditions represent our roots and continuity with our past, and should be maintained intact, while others think that traditions should adapt to change and circumstance. Discuss the quotation-see mock 7-in a 300-word essay. Jnw
Since the dawn of times tradition has been handed down as a fundamental principle of lives, and one is kind of “obliged" to follow it, even if it goes against his will. Otherwise, if one does not respect these rules, he is considered to be out of the normal. There is in fact a phrase, which simply reflects this situation: “Just because something is traditional is no reason to do it of course[…]”- expressed by Lemony Snicket-. In the opinion of who is writing right now, this person has well said, since there are several traditions that have been carried on for many years and, if applied to our existences, they could have consequences on us, which some can bear and others not. This concept is seen from different points of view in over the world: in some countries tradition has a strong impact on people, for their lives is almost totally based on it and also the elders guide the new generation on the same ways they had lived their youth previously. Examples of these ways of living are known, as the one of the pre-defined wedding, in which girls usually must accept the proposal because, if she goes against it, she would be mistreated so badly by members of her family. Compared to other countries traditions like these are excluded, since new and innovated stereotypes have been introduced, as women’s rights; so women have started to fulfill more themselves and be more independent and productive. In a nutshell traditions should adapt to new changes and to modernization, because times have changed and one can not still be linked to the past customs, since they are less available than the modern ones. And you? Are you heavily influenced from traditions or do you have your own ideal attitudes that alter them?
Since the dawn of times
tradition
has
been handed
down as a fundamental principle of
lives
, and one is kind of “obliged
"
to follow it, even if it goes against his will.
Otherwise
, if one does not respect these
rules
, he
is considered
to be out of the normal. There is in fact a phrase, which
simply
reflects this situation: “
Just
because
something is traditional is no reason to do it
of course
[…]”- expressed by Lemony
Snicket
-. In the opinion of who is writing right
now
, this person has well said, since there are several
traditions
that have
been carried
on for
many
years and, if applied to our existences, they could have consequences on us, which
some
can bear
and others
not. This concept is
seen
from
different
points of view in over the world: in
some
countries
tradition
has a strong impact on
people
, for their
lives
is almost
totally
based on it and
also
the elders guide the new generation on the same ways they had
lived
their youth previously. Examples of these ways of living
are known
, as the one of the
pre-defined
wedding, in which girls
usually
must
accept the proposal
because
, if she goes against it, she would
be mistreated
so
badly
by members of her family. Compared to other countries
traditions
like these
are excluded
, since new and innovated stereotypes have
been introduced
, as women’s rights;
so
women have
started
to fulfill more themselves and be more independent and productive. In a nutshell
traditions
should adapt to new
changes
and to modernization,
because
times have
changed
and one can not
still
be linked
to the past customs, since they are less available than the modern ones. And you? Are you
heavily
influenced from
traditions
or do you have your
own
ideal attitudes that alter them?
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IELTS essay PRODUCTION: Many people argue that traditions represent our roots and continuity with our past, and should be maintained intact, while others think that traditions should adapt to change and circumstance. Discuss the quotation-see mock 7-in a 300-word essay.

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