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Percentage reporting mood disorder

Percentage reporting mood disorder or7QB

The bar chart shows the number of men and women having mood disorders in different age groups. As can be observed from the chart that women are more prone to having a mood disorder. The aim of this report to describe and interpret the data given From the age of 35 to 44, about 9% of the women have mood disorder while the percentage for man around 4 %. it seems that the hormonal changes that accompany the nature of the women. As seen from the chart the number of men and women with mood disorder rise dramatically between 45 and 54. some suggest that menopause occurs after this group of age in women, and it is one of the causes of mood disorder. The low percentage for eoman and men from 12 to 19 years is propably because of people in this period of age are healthy and not exposed to nervous and psychological stress. However there is a rapidly increase in number of men with mood disorder until the age of 64 To conclude women are more likely to having a mood disorders in all age groups. And the risk decrease for both men and women after the age of 65 this may be attributed to a number of factors such as lifestyle and in this age the responsibility and hard working decrease

The bar chart shows
 the number of men
 and women
 having mood
 disorders in different
age
 groups. As can be observed
 from the chart that women
 are more prone to having a
mood disorder. The aim of this report to describe
 and interpret the data given

From the age
 of 35 to 44, about 9% of the women
 have mood
 disorder while the percentage for man
 around 4 %. it
 seems that the hormonal changes
 that accompany the nature of
the women
. As seen
 from the chart the number of men
 and women
 with mood
 disorder rise dramatically
 between 45 and 54. some
 suggest that menopause occurs after this group
of age
 in women
, and it is one of the causes of mood
 disorder. The low percentage for eoman
 and men
 from 12 to 19 years is propably
because
 of people
 in this period of age
 are
healthy and not exposed to nervous and psychological stress
. However
 there is a rapidly increase
 in number of men
 with mood
 disorder until the age
 of 64
To conclude
women
 are more likely to having a mood
 disorders in all age
 groups. And the risk
 decrease for both men
 and women
 after the age
 of 65 this may be attributed
 to a
number of factors such as lifestyle and in this age
 the responsibility and hard working
 decrease

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