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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people.

Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people. pmo9m
It is true that ordinary people try to copy famous by either the us of magazines or by watching their shows on TV. I would say that that it would have a profound influence on people on how they operate, think & argue in their life. On one hand, people copying from famous people is a good thing as it can some times motivates a person to do things or learn things which he would not do at all in his life, a perfect example would be of my friend who use to hate working on computer he always refuse to use computer for his work but from a movie related to hacking made him go wild and from then on he started to learn computer with all earnestly in order to become a proper hacker. There are also many advantages of this practice and one of them should be that it can also enhance the person personality to change to that of a proper ethics. On the other hand, the disadvantage for this practice can be very drastic to as it can change a person behaviour to become something unsavoury and problematic and sometime also lead towards sociological issue. There is also risk for a person to start walking a wrong path because of being influenced by a certain villainous act of an actor, children are the prime example for this influence. So to conclude we should try to copy the person which we like and try to absorb its good parts of his character, habits & overall personality in order to become a great benefit to the society.
It is true that ordinary
people
try to copy
famous
by either the us of magazines or by watching their
shows
on TV. I would say that that it would have a profound influence on
people
on how they operate,
think
& argue in their life. On one hand,
people
copying from
famous
people
is a
good
thing as it can
some
times motivates a
person
to do things or learn things which he would not do at all in his life, a perfect example would be of my friend who
use
to hate working on computer he always refuse to
use
computer for his work
but
from a movie related to hacking made him go wild and from then on he
started
to learn computer with all
earnestly
in order to become a proper hacker. There are
also
many
advantages of this practice and one of them should be that it can
also
enhance the
person
personality to
change
to that of a proper ethics.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage for this practice can be
very
drastic to as it can
change
a
person
behaviour to become something unsavoury and problematic and sometime
also
lead towards sociological issue. There is
also
risk
for a
person
to
start
walking a
wrong
path
because
of
being influenced
by a certain villainous act of an actor, children are the prime example for this influence.
So
to conclude
we should try to copy the
person
which we like and try to absorb its
good
parts of his character, habits &
overall
personality in order to become a great benefit to the society.
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