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On the way of Successful Entrepreneur

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MS. Shamima Akter (38) had born at destitute family at Kamalkhani at Baniachong Upazila in Habiganj District. When she married, her age was only fifteen. She has been living among Two Sons, one Daughter, and a lovely Husband isolated Village of Jamalpur at Uttar-Purbo Baniachong Union at Baniachong Upazila in Habiganj District. She started to struggle against Early married, Poverty reduction, Social Dignity, rights entitlements, and Social & economic development. Shamima Akter has been searching for alternative income sources and opportunities to change their survival life. Because her husband is a daily Masonry worker and had very little income, she had not been able to undertake the basic family needs. The Dhaka Ahsania Mission (DAM) has been working on SHOUHARDO III Program with Shamima Akter since 2016. She had accepted BDT 6000 from the SHOUHARDO III Program and started backyard Chicken & Duck farming. After ending the two-year, she realized that it might be a profitable business for destitute Families & me. She had started again Chicken & Duck backyard farming in a relatively large size, as well as communication among LSP, DLS, UYD, NGOs, and Bank to develop skills and capital for starting the Business. During that time, she received sewing training, purchased the Tailoring machine, and continued dressmaking. Then, she received training from the UYDO and took a loan from Karmasangsthan bank. Finally, she established a commercial poultry farm in the Village. Every month, she earns BDT 12000 from the Poultry farm & Tailoring BDT 5000. She has purchased two Cow from family Savings, and Village Savings Loan Association (VSLA) shares out money and started Cow rearing. At present, Two Cow markets approximately BDT 100000. She has been involved in Union Management Disaster Committee (UDMC), Community Group (CG) for developing the Community Clinic, Village Development Committee (VDC), and continued Volunteer service at the Community level, stopping women’s violence and abuse, establishing the leadership for underprivileged people, Solving the community problem for reducing the Risk. As well as building networking and linking among Government, Private, and Non-Government service providers for receiving the services. She said that I had spent a very helpless time with our family members, and now, I am not hopeless in my life because I have always searched for earning activities and found DAM through the SHOUHARDO III Program. Currently, I have established the VSLA and inspiring about savings and including low-income families, as well as advocacy; we have received 10 VGD Cards for the extreme people. I would like to support my poor people by changing their social & econ life. I have been achieving leadership, providing decisions, communicating with the different service institutes, as well as increasing my social dignity. I anticipated that I would be able to establish my Sons and Daughters well through good education. Prepared by Maruf Hossain Field Trainer Economic Development Uttar Purbo Baniachong, Baniachong, Habiagnaj
MS.
Shamima
Akter
(38) had born at destitute
family
at
Kamalkhani
at
Baniachong
Upazila
in
Habiganj
District. When she married, her age was
only
fifteen. She has been living among Two Sons, one Daughter, and a lovely Husband isolated
Village
of
Jamalpur
at
Uttar-Purbo
Baniachong
Union at
Baniachong
Upazila
in
Habiganj
District. She
started
to struggle against Early married, Poverty reduction,
Social
Dignity, rights entitlements, and
Social
& economic development.
Shamima
Akter
has been searching for alternative income sources and opportunities to
change
their survival life.
Because
her husband is a daily Masonry worker and had
very
little
income, she had not been able to undertake the basic
family
needs. The Dhaka
Ahsania
Mission (DAM) has been working on
SHOUHARDO
III Program with
Shamima
Akter
since 2016. She had
accepted
BDT 6000 from the
SHOUHARDO
III Program and
started
backyard Chicken & Duck farming. After ending the two-year, she realized that it might be a profitable business for destitute
Families
& me. She had
started
again Chicken & Duck backyard farming in a
relatively
large size, as
well
as communication among LSP, DLS,
UYD
, NGOs, and Bank to develop
skills
and capital for starting the Business. During that time, she received sewing training,
purchased
the Tailoring machine, and continued dressmaking. Then, she received training from the
UYDO
and took a loan from
Karmasangsthan
bank.
Finally
, she established a commercial poultry farm in the
Village
. Every month, she earns BDT 12000 from the Poultry farm & Tailoring BDT 5000. She has
purchased
two
Cow
from
family
Savings, and
Village
Savings Loan Association (
VSLA
) shares out money and
started
Cow rearing. At present, Two Cow markets approximately BDT 100000. She has
been involved
in Union Management Disaster Committee (
UDMC
),
Community
Group (CG) for developing the
Community
Clinic,
Village
Development Committee (VDC), and continued Volunteer service at the
Community
level, stopping women’s violence and abuse, establishing the leadership for underprivileged
people
, Solving the
community
problem for reducing the
Risk
. As
well
as building networking and linking among
Government
, Private, and Non-
Government
service providers for receiving the services. She said that I had spent a
very
helpless time with our
family
members, and
now
, I am not hopeless in my life
because
I have always searched for earning activities and found DAM through the
SHOUHARDO
III Program.
Currently
, I have established the
VSLA
and inspiring about savings and including low-income
families
, as
well
as advocacy; we have received 10 VGD Cards for the extreme
people
. I would like to support my poor
people
by changing their
social
& econ life. I have been achieving leadership, providing decisions, communicating with the
different
service institutes, as
well
as increasing my
social
dignity.
I
anticipated that I would be able to establish my Sons and Daughters
well
through
good
education. Prepared by
Maruf
Hossain
Field Trainer Economic Development
Uttar
Purbo
Baniachong
,
Baniachong
,
Habiagnaj
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