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1. Question: If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

1. Question: If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. 026yB
countries all over the world want to show themself in such ways they are good at it. my country is very famous at arts and hand crafts. therefore I think handcrafts are the best choice for representing in an international exhibition, such as rug or carpets. more over there are other reasons that I think handcrafts are the best choice in my opinion. to begin with, I always watch foreign movie and documents, I see that persian carpet and rugs always amaze that people. in addition they always use it as a luxury thing. therefore I think they are very interested in carpets and rugs and somehow I want to show them their oroginally and culture. second, on of the first thing that reseachers found about human life in my country and it was signs of the living in here, was a very old persian rug. and it shows in a famous musiem today. in addition, I believe we are proffesional weaving them. also, our rugs have many unique signs and symbols, while all of them have its own meaning hence I am excited to explain these symbols to all the interested people. for example, the meaning of the flowers symbols or even the animals shape that weavers used in their weaving. third, today is the age of the technology. I think now a day due to the fact, most of the people have not enough time and also handcrafts are very expencive, many of people prefer machine rugs instead of beautiful rugs. nevertheless, I think it is a good situation to reminde people these expensiveness is valueable. at least they must see these handcrafts in near to underestand that machine version is not good enough. in conclusion, I would like to introduce persian carpets to an international exhibition. since I believe they are cultural and beautiful. moreover, they are unique enough to be shown in an international display.
countries
all over the world want to
show
themself
in such ways they are
good
at it.
my
country is
very
famous
at arts and hand crafts.
therefore
I
think
handcrafts are the best choice for representing in an international exhibition, such as
rug
or
carpets
.
more
over there are other reasons that I
think
handcrafts are the best choice in my opinion.
to
begin
with, I always
watch
foreign movie and documents, I
see
that
persian
carpet
and
rugs
always amaze that
people
.
in
addition
they always
use
it as a luxury thing.
therefore
I
think
they are
very
interested in
carpets
and
rugs
and
somehow I want to
show
them their
oroginally
and culture.
second
, on of the
first
thing that
reseachers
found about human life in my country
and
it was signs of the living in here, was a
very
old
persian
rug
.
and
it
shows
in a
famous
musiem
today
.
in
addition, I believe we are
proffesional
weaving them.
also
, our
rugs
have
many
unique signs and symbols, while all of them have its
own
meaning
hence
I
am excited
to
explain
these symbols to all the interested
people
.
for
example, the meaning of the flowers symbols or even the animals shape that weavers
used
in their weaving.
third
,
today
is the age of the technology. I
think
now
a day due to the fact, most of the
people
have not
enough
time and
also
handcrafts are
very
expencive
,
many
of
people
prefer machine
rugs
instead
of
beautiful
rugs
.
nevertheless
, I
think
it is a
good
situation to
reminde
people
these expensiveness
is
valueable
.
at
least they
must
see
these handcrafts in near to
underestand
that machine version is not
good
enough
.
in
conclusion, I would like to introduce
persian
carpets
to an international exhibition.
since
I believe they are cultural and
beautiful
.
moreover
, they are unique
enough
to
be shown
in an international display.
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