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Myths and tales in men's history

Myths and tales in men's history mVA9N
Since the first day of human history, we had this endless will to tell stories. From the paintings on the carve to the Shekspeir and Kafka, we developed our story tellings skills, to communicate, to learn and teach others what we have learnet in our life, to share our exprincesses and grow. So, that's why the myths and tales are exits and are so important to us, human beings. We keep telling them to the next generations, to keep those tales alive. It's a legacy of our ancestors to guide us in this world. Though some of them might be useless over the centuries, but some of them are immortal. Even the ones that are not useful for our daily lives anymore, can help us to understand how the human culture changes through time. There are lots of different tales. We can divide them into various groups base on lots of criterions but there are similarities between them that can give us a vision of the global beliefs, something that we can call men's understanding of the world despite religions or geometry. For example, in many famous tales, there is always a creature that's smarter than us and if we can convince it to help us, it can solve everything and change our lives for real. We can't understand how can it do it, but we don't need to. We are not responsible for changing our world. All we can do is trying to find that creature and ask it to end our misery. As long as that creature meets our needs, we don't need to know how things are changing in our lives. We just have to appreciate and be thankful for its favour. I think it comes from how governments taught ordinary people to just accept their lord's orders because they're better than ordinary people, They can change people's lives for real, but only if they submitted and appreciate them. People actually accept that by heart, that's why we made lot's of the tales based on this. So we can teach their kids the way to survive in this world. It was the only way they had the chance to know. They could not ever think of being that smarter, better, and stronger creatures. It's not because they couldn't be, they just taught to think they can't.
Since the
first
day of human history, we had this endless will to
tell
stories. From the paintings on
the carve
to the
Shekspeir
and Kafka, we developed our story
tellings
skills
, to communicate, to learn and teach others what we have
learnet
in
our
life, to share our
exprincesses
and grow.
So
, that's why the myths and
tales
are
exits
and are
so
important
to us, human beings. We
keep
telling them to the
next
generations
, to
keep
those
tales
alive. It's a legacy of our ancestors to guide us
in
this
world. Though
some
of them might be useless over the centuries,
but
some
of
them
are immortal. Even the ones that are not useful for our daily
lives
anymore, can
help
us to understand how the human culture
changes
through time. There are lots of
different
tales
. We can divide them into various groups base
on
lots of criterions
but
there are similarities between them that can give us a vision of the global beliefs, something that we can call
men
's understanding of the world
despite
religions or geometry.
For example
, in
many
famous
tales
, there is always a
creature
that's smarter than us and if we can convince it to
help
us, it can solve everything and
change
our
lives
for
real. We can't understand how can it do it,
but
we don't need to. We are
not
responsible
for changing our world. All we can do is trying to find that
creature
and
ask
it to
end
our misery. As long as that
creature
meets our needs, we don't
need
to
know how things are changing in our
lives
. We
just
have to
appreciate and
be
thankful
for its
favour
. I
think
it
comes
from how
governments
taught ordinary
people
to
just
accept their lord's orders
because
they're better than ordinary
people
, They can
change
people
's
lives
for real,
but
only
if they submitted and appreciate them.
People
actually
accept that by heart, that's why we made
lot's
of the
tales
based on this.
So
we can teach their kids the way to survive in this world. It was the
only
way
they
had the chance to know. They could not ever
think
of being that smarter, better, and stronger
creatures
. It's not
because
they couldn't be, they
just
taught
to
think
they can't.
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