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MY HOLIDAY ON THE INDEPENDENCE DAY OCCASION

MY HOLIDAY ON THE INDEPENDENCE DAY OCCASION a1eyd

To any country, Independence Day is an important historical, political or cultural event associated with its current status. In most nations, this holiday initially leads to the birth of the country. Similarly in Vietnam, on September 2nd, 1945, Ho Chi Minh read the Declaration of Independence to establish the Democratic Republic of Vietnam. From that moment on, every year is the same as Vietnamese people have been always celebrating the meaningful occasion. This year, we have 4 days off on Independence Day. Many of my friends have gone back to their hometowns to enjoy the holiday with their families. Due to some problems with my job, I decided to stay in Da Nang with a mating room. We have a lighted occasion together. This is our chance to spend more time ourselves putting our feet up. We rode around Danang city and try the local food such as Banh xeo, Banh canh, Quang noodles, and so on. All things that we've experienced we save to cellphones so that we can have something to tell later. During the last 2 days of vacation, we plan the new semester and prepare some assignments for the next week. For me, such a gentle vacation is enough, my and friend also have gorgeous memories.

To any country, Independence Day is an important
 historical, political or cultural event
 associated with its current
 status. In most nations, this holiday initially
 leads to the birth of the country.

Similarly
 in Vietnam, on September 2nd, 1945, Ho Chi Minh read the Declaration of Independence to establish the Democratic Republic of Vietnam. From that moment on, every year is the same as Vietnamese people
 have been always celebrating the meaningful occasion.

This year, we have 4 days off on Independence Day. Many
 of my friends have gone back to their hometowns to enjoy the holiday with their families. Due to some
 problems with my job, I decided to stay in Da Nang with a mating room. We have a lighted occasion together. This is our chance to spend more time ourselves putting our feet up. We rode around Danang city and try the local food such as Banh xeo, Banh canh, Quang noodles, and so
 on. All things that we've experienced we save to cellphones so
 that we can have something to tell
 later.

During the last 2 days of vacation, we plan the new semester and prepare some
 assignments for the next
 week. For me, such a gentle vacation is enough
, my and friend also
 have gorgeous memories. 

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