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motivate peaple in KSA to use buses

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Good afternoon girls Can I ask you a small question for all of you as students when we are late or if someone is late, what is going to be the first excuse I’m 100% sure it is always going to be traffic, traffic was and always will be the best excuse here is KSA but actually, traffic here in KSA is going insane it’s a huge problem and we need a solution but what surprises me is that we know the solution never worked on it and it is buses, buses can solve this problem like magic but we never gave it a chance and I’m here to discuss how to motivate people here In KSA to use buses more often. The first important thing is to know the users of the bus are they, students or workers? Women or men? Poor or rich? This is important information to know specifically the services you need. if a lot of the bus users is women you need to make sure it is private or even have specific busses for woman, and if there’s is a lot of student making a bus student discount might be amazing so even if the busses are not free making sure the prices are affordable so everyone will be able to use it. Secondly knowing that cars are expensive busses might be a lifesaver for a lot of people who are unable to afford Cars by this we can guess that a lot of bus users will be out of money so prices are really important so while researching I found that buses here in KSA for adults is between 13 – 75 and for kids between 7 – 33 which is confusing because the gap is really massive so we need to have a flat rate so the prices will be much clearer. Last but not least is organization so the bus station needs to be better and the most important part is having a map and a timetable so the bus users will be able to know the specific timeline for the bus and when will it come and surly Saudi Arabia now improved technologically so having an app for buses so knowing the bus station location or the time the bus will arrive and even have notification when its almost there will be great.
Good
afternoon girls Can I ask you a
small
question for all of you as
students
when we are late or if someone is late, what is going to be the
first
excuse I’m 100% sure it is always going to be traffic, traffic was and always will be the best excuse here is KSA
but
actually, traffic here in KSA is going insane it’s a huge
problem and
we
need
a solution
but
what surprises me is that we
know
the solution never worked on it and it is buses, buses can solve this problem like magic
but
we never gave it a chance and I’m here to discuss how to motivate
people
here In KSA to
use
buses more
often
. The
first
important
thing is to
know
the
users
of the bus are they,
students
or workers? Women or
men
? Poor or rich? This is
important
information to
know
specifically
the services you
need
.
if
a
lot
of the bus
users
is women you
need
to
make
sure it is private or even have specific busses for woman, and if
there’s is
a
lot
of
student
making a bus
student
discount might be amazing
so
even if the busses are not free making sure the prices are affordable
so
everyone will be able to
use
it.
Secondly
knowing that cars are expensive busses might be a lifesaver for a
lot
of
people
who are unable to afford Cars by this we can guess that a
lot
of bus
users
will be out of money
so
prices are
really
important
so
while researching I found that buses here in KSA for adults is between 13 – 75 and for kids between 7 – 33 which is confusing
because
the gap is
really
massive
so
we
need
to have a flat rate
so
the prices will be much clearer. Last
but
not least is organization
so
the bus station
needs
to be better and the most
important
part is having a map and a timetable
so
the bus
users
will be able to
know
the specific timeline for the bus and when will it
come
and surly Saudi Arabia
now
improved
technologically
so
having an app for buses
so
knowing the bus station location or the time the bus will arrive and even have notification when its almost there will be great.
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