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Knowlegde and information about past and heritage is avalaible on internet so there is no need of museums.Do you agree with that?

Knowlegde and information about past and heritage is avalaible on internet so there is no need of museums. Do you agree with that? y7V
Culture and history plays a significant role in one’s life. It teaches us about our roots, our strengths, values and great lessons for mankind. I completely agree with the given statement as interent can not take the place of museum. Internet is taking place of nearly each and everything but as far as museums are concerned, it cannot take museum’s place and should not. Museums are the places that open doors to see, feel and touch everythig in person, related to past culture and heritage which is not compared with seeing those incredible memories and things just by surfing on the internet. The memories that hold such a great value can only impact one by seeing them in real not by internet which givee only a superfical experience. Museums give profound experiences for lifetime. For an instance, a child behaviour, morals, values get shaped by his/her surroundings and the most part of their young age of their foundation times is spend in schools but the current education system only emphasis on academic and make them market ready or job ready. But also it is not correct to judge to education system as well because they are doing their part in so many aspects of a child education. And same goes for parents as well and parents can only teach their children the things they know about. So it is not so good to put all the pressure on parents and educational instittions but if you take the children to museums, there they touch, feel and hold the items once used by greater warriors, scholars, freedom fighters and poets and many others and such experinces will give them perspectives for lifetime and children will know, feel and realise and understand where they come from and understand the greater personalities who came before them and gave their greater contributions and set a standords to be followed up or looked upto. In today times, internet has been the centre of everybody’s life but the real experiments, touching the items and learning about things by visiting places has enormous and different values in it. Internet who is suppose to be a helping hand has become distraction, toxic and false in mahy ways. With too much of its usage, life has been put into a box. Anything one wants to know and learn about, internet has taken the place and made the experiences dull and most of the time the information given is half truth and completely false. Life experiences, knowing oneself by knowing history and building morals and personalities by looking upto past greater personalities can only be achived by real experiences. Impacting young one’s or any age group and any humas can be achieved by givig them close to reality experience. So visiting different museums, once in a while should be part of everybody’s life.
Culture and history plays a significant role in one’s
life
. It teaches us about our roots, our strengths, values and great lessons for mankind. I completely
agree
with the
given
statement as
interent
can not take the
place
of museum. Internet is taking
place
of
nearly
each and everything
but
as far as
museums
are concerned
, it cannot take
museum’s
place
and should not.
Museums
are the
places
that open doors to
see
, feel and touch
everythig
in person, related to past culture and heritage which is not compared with seeing those incredible memories and things
just
by surfing on the internet. The memories that hold such a great
value
can
only
impact one by seeing them in real not by internet which
givee
only
a
superfical
experience. Museums give profound
experiences
for lifetime. For an instance, a child
behaviour
, morals, values
get
shaped by his/her surroundings and the most part of their young age of their foundation times is
spend
in schools
but
the
current
education system
only
emphasis on academic and
make
them market ready or job ready.
But
also
it is not correct to judge to education system
as well
because
they are doing their part in
so
many
aspects of a child education. And same goes for parents
as well
and parents can
only
teach their children the things they know about.
So
it is not
so
good
to put all the pressure on parents and educational
instittions
but
if you take the children to
museums
, there they touch, feel and hold the items once
used
by greater warriors, scholars, freedom fighters and poets and
many
others and such
experinces
will give them perspectives for lifetime and children will know, feel and
realise
and understand where they
come
from and understand the greater personalities who came
before
them and gave their greater contributions and set a
standords
to
be followed
up or looked
upto
. In
today
times, internet has been the
centre
of everybody’s
life
but
the real experiments, touching the items and learning about things by visiting
places
has enormous and
different
values in it. Internet who is
suppose
to be a helping hand has become distraction, toxic and false in
mahy
ways. With too much of its usage,
life
has
been put
into a box. Anything one wants to know and learn about, internet has taken the
place
and made the
experiences
dull and most of the time the information
given
is
half truth
and completely false. Life
experiences
, knowing oneself by knowing history and building morals and personalities by looking
upto
past greater personalities can
only
be
achived
by real
experiences
. Impacting young one’s or any age group and any
humas
can
be achieved
by
givig
them close to reality
experience
.
So
visiting
different
museums
, once in a while should be part of everybody’s
life
.
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