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It you have lot of money where you will spent on car or go to vacation

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In life we have different types of dreams which we want to pursue but because of lack of money we cannot fulfil our dreams and desires. Sometimes, i do wonder what I will do with so much money. Some of them think about buying a new car and some about going on vacation. if someone gives me an excess amount of money i will go for a vacation where i will spend all my money. It is quite funny to say this but yes this is the truth. Now, why in a sudden i want to spend money on my vacation, their are many reasons behind my wildest dreams but the primary reason is relax. Due to our busy time, we don't give rest to our body which is actually quite bad for our health. Just because of overwork we give stress to our body which we are unaware about it. So, taking a break from our respective work is quite beneficial for ourselves. Second reason is knowing different cultures, now, suppose I go on vacation to a different country or I can say a "strange place", it will be something interesting for us to examine different cultures like the way of living or their language. These things will help me to know and understand the world. thirdly which i find most important is because of the way i was brought up. From i was shown that going on vacation to some countries can help to know myself like what i am capable of and to what limit i can push myself for a particular challenges and these things are more important that buying luxurious items With these points i find that going on vacation is something more interesting than buying car or other items

In life we have different
 types of dreams which we want to pursue but
because
 of lack of money
 we cannot fulfil our dreams and desires. Sometimes
, i do wonder what I will do with so
 much money
. Some
 of them think
 about buying a new car and some
 about going on vacation.

if someone gives me an excess amount of money
 i will go for a vacation
 where i will spend all my money
. It is quite funny
 to say this but
 yes this is the truth. Now
, why in a sudden i want to spend money
 on my vacation
, their are many
 reasons behind my wildest dreams but
 the primary reason is relax. Due to our busy time, we don't give rest to our body which is actually quite bad
 for our health. Just
because
 of overwork we give stress
 to our body which we are unaware about it. So
, taking a break from our respective work is quite beneficial for ourselves.

Second reason is knowing different
 cultures, now
, suppose I go on vacation
 to a different
 country or I can say a "strange place", it will be something interesting for us to examine different
 cultures like the way of living or their language. These things will help
 me to know and understand the world.

thirdly
 which i find most important
 is because
 of the way i was brought
 up. From i was shown
 that going on vacation
 to some
 countries can help
 to know myself like what i am capable of and to what limit i can push myself for a particular challenges and these things are more important
 that buying luxurious items

With these points i find that going on vacation
 is something more interesting than buying car or other items

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