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FEMALE AND MALE GRADUATE IN CANADA

FEMALE AND MALE GRADUATE IN CANADA 79p33

the graph informs data about university graduates in Canda from 1992 until 2007. Data comparise between females and males graduate. The female's data can be seen in purple graphic whereas the males' data can be seen ad comparison in blue graphic. From the data, we can see that female graduates are more than male graduates. Two those graphs from 1992 until 1999 have same trend. Beginning from 70. 000 graduates for male and 100. 000 graduates for female. Graphics show the increasing trend unti 1995 and both of them decreas together until 1999. But, the male data so fluctuative between 1999 until 2001. In 2000, males graduates' data go through little incresing while in 2001 it decrease again and in 2002, the data increase stabilly until 2006. Different with female's data, the female's data more constant signed with incresing graphic from 1999 until 2004 and there is slight decrease between 2004 to 2005. So the conclusion is female graduate is more than male graduate, it is about 30. 000 until 70. 000 of the differences.

the graph informs data
 about university graduates
 in Canda from 1992 until 2007. Data
 comparise between females
 and males
graduate
. The female's data
 can be seen
 in purple graphic whereas the males' data
 can be seen
 ad comparison in blue graphic. From the data
, we can see
 that female
graduates
 are more than male graduates.

Two those graphs from 1992 until 1999 have same trend. Beginning from 70. 000 graduates
 for male and 100. 000 graduates
 for female
. Graphics
show
 the increasing trend unti 1995 and both of them decreas together until 1999. But
, the male data
so
 fluctuative between 1999 until 2001. In 2000, males
 graduates' data
 go through little
 incresing while in 2001 it decrease again and in 2002, the data
 increase stabilly
 until 2006. Different
 with female's data
, the female's data
 more constant signed with incresing graphic from 1999 until 2004 and there is slight decrease between 2004 to 2005.

So
 the conclusion is female
graduate
 is more than male graduate
, it is about 30. 000 until 70. 000 of the differences. 

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