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buying behaviour in New Zealand. where on 2003

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there were a changes habits in buying behaviour in New Zealand. where on 2003 peoples like to travel it shows from the pie chart above. in 2003 Travel has the highest number of the sales followed by clothes, film/music and books. from the data above we can assume peoples more like travel than book and it means the people in New Zealand had a low interest in reading a book. but in 2013 there were a lot of changes in buying behaviour. based on the pie chart above it shows that in 2013 there were an increasing number of film/music purchases. the changes is also happened in the travel and clothes sector they experience a declined number of purchases. this because the changes habit of costumer behaviour and also the technology. at 2003 there were no Apple Music or an appropriate online shopping. but in 2013 Apple already launch their apple music people can listening the music using their iPods and buy the music through an apple store. at that time the costumer become a digital native where they can easily access an internet to get an information or entertainment, currently to spend the time peoples like to watch a movie. in 2003 if people want to see the film they need to go to the movies or stayed at home and watching television. but at 2013 people can watch an online movie through online platform in anywhere and anytime. that's the reason why there were the changes of the number in online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand.

there were a changes
 habits in buying behaviour in New Zealand. where on 2003 peoples
 like to travel
 it shows
 from the pie chart above. in 2003 Travel
 has the highest number
 of the sales followed by clothes, film/music and books. from the data above we can assume peoples
 more like travel
 than book and it means the people
 in New Zealand had a low interest in reading a book. but
 in 2013 there were a lot of
changes
 in buying behaviour. based on the pie chart above it shows
 that in 2013 there were an increasing number
 of film/music purchases
. the changes
 is also
 happened in the travel
 and clothes sector they experience a declined number
 of purchases
. this because
 the changes
 habit of costumer behaviour and also
 the technology. at 2003 there were no Apple
Music
 or an appropriate online
 shopping. but
 in 2013 Apple
 already launch their apple
music
people
 can listening the music
 using their iPods and buy
 the music
 through an apple
 store. at that time the costumer become a digital native where they can easily
 access an internet to get
 an information or entertainment, currently
 to spend the time peoples
 like to watch
 a movie. in 2003 if people
 want to see
 the film they need to go to the movies or stayed at home and watching television. but
 at 2013 people
 can watch
 an online
 movie through online
 platform in anywhere and anytime. that's the reason why there were the changes
 of the number
 in online
 sales for retail sectors in New Zealand. 

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