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As Mark was about to throw away the bottle...

As Mark was about to throw away the bottle. . . AmaN1
As Mark was about to throw away the bottle, he saw that there was a piece of paper inside it. Up close, it looked less remarkable. Then, he suddenly realised that there was an image on the piece of paper. Mark was determined that it could be a treasure map. So he cautiously took the note by using a cork, taking care not to cut himself on the jagged mouth of the bottle. Then, after taking out the piece of paper, he was delighted because it turned out to be a treasure map as he expected. He felt excited because he knew if there was a treasure map it would give him a high chance of becoming rich. Mark decisively shouted, "I'm going to become rich! " The next day, he started preparing for his quest. Afterward, he started searching for the island on the map. During his journey, he became friends with so many people. After hard work of searching for five days, he finally reached the island. To his surprise, the island was filled with exotic trees and plants. Then he started searching for treasure. A while later, he found the place the treasure was buried. Mark excitedly shouted, "I finally found it. " A while later, he started digging out the place where the treasure was buried. Much later, he dug the treasure out, and to his surprise, even the treasure box was made out of gold and layered with diamonds. As soon as he was just about to open the treasure, suddenly the black and thundering did not stop. Much later, he heard a scream from the treasure box, and the treasure box opened on its own and popped out a soul eater. Just then, he suddenly realised the treasure was cursed and then he desperately ran for his life, but he couldn't find his way out. At that time, he knew this was the end of him and was ready to accept his fate.
As Mark was about to throw away the bottle, he
saw
that there was a piece of paper inside it. Up close, it looked less remarkable. Then, he
suddenly
realised that there was an image on the piece of paper. Mark
was determined
that it could be a
treasure
map
.
So
he
cautiously
took the note by using a cork, taking care not to
cut
himself on the jagged mouth of the bottle. Then, after taking out the piece of paper, he
was delighted
because
it turned out to be a
treasure
map
as he
expected
. He felt excited
because
he knew if there was a
treasure
map
it would give him a high chance of becoming rich. Mark
decisively
shouted, "I'm going to become rich! " The
next
day, he
started
preparing for his quest. Afterward, he
started
searching for the island on the
map
. During his journey, he became friends with
so
many
people
. After
hard
work of searching for five days, he
finally
reached the island. To his surprise, the island
was filled
with exotic trees and plants. Then he
started
searching for
treasure
. A while
later
, he found the place the
treasure
was buried
. Mark
excitedly
shouted, "I
finally
found it. " A while
later
, he
started
digging out the place where the
treasure
was buried
. Much
later
, he dug the
treasure
out, and to his surprise, even the
treasure
box
was made
out of gold and layered with diamonds. As
soon
as he was
just
about to open the
treasure
,
suddenly
the black and thundering did not
stop
. Much
later
, he heard a scream from the
treasure
box, and the
treasure
box opened on its
own
and popped out a soul eater.
Just
then, he
suddenly
realised the
treasure
was cursed
and then he
desperately
ran for his life,
but
he couldn't find his way out. At that time, he knew this was the
end
of him and was ready to accept his fate.
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