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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both views and then give your opinion.

International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. 2G6xj
Some people mention that the occurrence of global marketing will bring several benefits to each country. On the other hand, others believe that we should not support it. From my point of view, I think that there are a lot of advantages by participating of worldwide marketing due to cooperation of local individuals and foreigners. There have been many pros since establishing of international marketing. First of all, in the past, before having global marketing, people world have knowledge only about materials, or any kind of manufacturing in the specific areas because in that time, every country didn't contact each other as nowadays. For instance, in ancient Thai, people always ate marely traditional fund, such as soup, whereas, currently, this country is influented from various countries. As a result, we can find plenty at different national diet. Secondly, local individuals will recieve new languages because of arrival of foreign countries. For example, after some companies have been in Thailand for a period the number of workers who can speak English fluently has increased obviously. However, there are some drawbacks as well. As a lot of foreign companies have come to the local area, some original companies are closed because they lose the marketing competition to new companies. To sum up, there are both pros and cons of global marketing, but all in all, the advantages still outweigh. Therefore, we should encourage for having this thing. Finally, government should set the effective regulations to control the international companies to not get rid of the previous local firms.
Some
people
mention that the occurrence of global
marketing
will bring several benefits to each
country
.
On the other hand
, others believe that we should not support it. From my point of view, I
think
that there are
a lot of
advantages by participating of worldwide
marketing
due to cooperation of
local
individuals and foreigners. There have been
many
pros since establishing of international
marketing
.
First
of all, in the past,
before
having global
marketing
,
people
world have knowledge
only
about materials, or any kind of manufacturing in the specific areas
because
in that time, every
country
didn't contact each other as nowadays.
For instance
, in ancient Thai,
people
always ate
marely
traditional fund, such as soup, whereas,
currently
, this
country
is influented
from various
countries
.
As a result
, we can find
plenty
at
different
national diet.
Secondly
,
local
individuals will recieve new languages
because
of arrival of foreign
countries
.
For example
, after
some
companies
have been in Thailand for a period the number of workers who can speak English
fluently
has increased
obviously
.
However
, there are
some
drawbacks
as well
. As
a lot of
foreign
companies
have
come
to the
local
area,
some
original
companies
are closed
because
they lose the
marketing
competition to new
companies
. To sum up, there are both pros and cons of global
marketing
,
but
all in all, the advantages
still
outweigh.
Therefore
, we should encourage for having this thing.
Finally
,
government
should set the effective regulations to control the international
companies
to not
get
rid of the previous
local
firms.
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