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Indian Pirsoners.give your opinion

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Changes in a society demand changes in the way of maintaining social order. The techniques of social control are also adjusted to changed situations, as no system of social control works perfectly. People often deviate from social and legal norms, although non-conformity varies greatly in form and frequency. Though deviation is perceived as a threat to social stability yet attitude towards deviants keeps on changing with change in beliefs in the causes of deviant behaviour in general and crime in particular. There was a time when crime was attributed to the possession of an individual by evil spirits. Then, it came to be believed that crime was the result of biological defect, mental illness, defective social environment, or of conflicting sets of norms and values, and so forth. With such changes in attitude towards crime, general attitude towards criminals and particularly with regard to punishing criminals, has also kept on changing. With this change over time, the functions of prisons have also changed from custodial, to coercive, to corrective. In early India, jails functioned on the principle of custodial care. With the assertion that a jail for confinement and not for punishment, prisons were concerned simply with holding prisoners while they waited for trial during the medieval and early British periods, emphasis came to be laid on retributive and deterrent aspects of punishment. Physical torture, social degradation and restrictions on freedom were among the programmes used for inflicting pain on criminals. Prisons were primarily used as penal institutions. No attention was paid to differences in age, sex, nature of crime, criminal background or mental status of the offenders. It was only after the recommendations of the Jail Reforms Committee of 1919 were accepted that conditions in prisons gradually improved and prisons came to be used for corrective purposes, i. e. , for bringing offenders round to becoming good citizens through discipline of work, education, and moral instructions.

Changes
 in a society demand changes
 in the way of maintaining social
 order. The techniques of social
 control are also
 adjusted to changed
 situations, as no system of social
 control works perfectly
. People
often
 deviate from social
 and legal norms, although non-conformity varies greatly
 in form and frequency.

Though deviation is perceived
 as a threat to social
 stability yet
 attitude towards deviants keeps
 on changing with change
 in beliefs in the causes of deviant behaviour
in general
 and crime
in particular
. There was a time when crime
was attributed
 to the possession of an individual by evil spirits.

Then, it came to be believed
 that crime
 was the result of biological defect, mental illness, defective social
 environment, or of conflicting sets of norms and values, and so
 forth. With such changes
 in attitude towards crime
, general attitude towards criminals
 and particularly
 with regard to punishing criminals
, has also
kept
 on changing.

With this change
 over time, the functions of prisons
 have also
changed
 from custodial, to coercive, to
 corrective. In early India, jails functioned on the principle of custodial care.

With the assertion that a jail for confinement and not for punishment, prisons
were concerned
simply
 with holding prisoners while they waited for trial during the medieval and early British periods, emphasis came to be laid
 on retributive and deterrent aspects of punishment.

Physical torture, social
 degradation and restrictions on freedom were among the programmes
used
 for inflicting pain on criminals
. Prisons
 were primarily
used
 as penal institutions. No attention was paid
 to differences in age, sex, nature of crime
, criminal
 background or mental status of the offenders.

It was only
 after the recommendations of the Jail Reforms Committee of 1919 were accepted
 that conditions in prisons
gradually
improved
 and prisons
 came to be used
 for corrective purposes, i. e.
 ,
 for bringing offenders round to becoming good
 citizens through discipline of work, education, and moral instructions. 

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