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IN SOME POORER AREAS OF LARGE CITIES PEOPLE ARE TOO AFRAID TO LEAVE THEIR HOUSES AT NIGHT TIME DUE TO A FEAR OF CRIME. WHAT ARE TGE CAUSES OF CRIME IN THOSE AREAS AND WHAT CAN BE DONE TO TACKLE THOSE PROBLEMS?

IN SOME POORER AREAS OF LARGE CITIES PEOPLE ARE TOO AFRAID TO LEAVE THEIR HOUSES AT NIGHT TIME DUE TO A FEAR OF CRIME. WHAT ARE TGE CAUSES OF CRIME IN THOSE AREAS AND WHAT CAN BE DONE TO TACKLE THOSE PROBLEMS? Qd1lx
THE PLACES IN CITIES WITH LOW LIVING CONDITION ARE OFTEN RECORDED FOR INCREASED CRIME, SPECIALLY DURING DARK TIME OF THE DAY. THE PEOPLE LIVED THERE ARE FRIGHTENED TO LEAVE HOMES AT NIGHT. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE MAIN CAUSES AND POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS FOR THIS CONDITION. MAINLY THE PROBLEM IS MONEY OR VALUBLE ITEMS MAY STALL IN THESE AREAS DUE TO LOW INCOME. THE OTHER WORDS LESS OPPORTUNITIES FOR JOBS AND EDUCATION WOULD INCREASED THE THE THIEVES AND SMUGLERS IN THE SOCIETY. MOREOVER DRUGS HAVE BECOME ANOTHER CAUSE FOR INCREASING CRIMINALS AMONG SUCH SOCIETY. DUE TO ABOVE PROBLEMS THE COMMON PEOPLE ARE AT DAGER. GOVERNMENT HAS A HUGE RESPONSIBILITY TO PROTECT PEOPLE THROUGH SECURITY FORCES SUCH AS POLICE AND SPECIAL TRAINING ARMY FORCES. HOWEVER, LONGTERM SOLUTIONS ARE NEEDED FOR THESE SITUATIONS. THERE SHOULD BE EQUAL OPPORTUNITIES FOR RIGHTS OF PEOPLE SUCH AS, MEALS, EDUCATION AND HEALTH. GOVERNMENT OR NON GOVERNMENT ORGANIZTIONS SHOULD PAY ATTENTION TO GIVE FUNDS, SCHOLARSHIPS, OPPORTUNITIES FOR JOBS AND PROPER GUIDANCE FOR DRUG ADDICTORS TO REDUCE THE PREVALENCE OF CRIMINALS IN THESES COMMUNITIES. THE PEOPLE WOULD BE LESSEN THEIR FEAR AT WALK OUT FROM HOUSES AT NIGHT TIME WTH THE ADDRESS OF CAUSES OF POVERTY AND DRUG ADDICTION THROUGH SHORT TERM AND LONG TERM SOLUTIONS FOR THE COMMUNITY.
THE PLACES IN CITIES WITH LOW LIVING CONDITION ARE
OFTEN
RECORDED FOR INCREASED CRIME,
SPECIALLY
DURING DARK TIME OF THE DAY. THE
PEOPLE
LIVED
THERE
ARE FRIGHTENED
TO
LEAVE
HOMES AT NIGHT. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE MAIN CAUSES AND POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS FOR THIS CONDITION.
MAINLY
THE PROBLEM IS MONEY OR
VALUBLE
ITEMS MAY STALL IN THESE AREAS DUE TO LOW INCOME. THE OTHER WORDS LESS OPPORTUNITIES FOR JOBS AND EDUCATION WOULD
INCREASED
THE THE
THIEVES AND
SMUGLERS
IN THE SOCIETY.
MOREOVER
DRUGS HAVE BECOME ANOTHER CAUSE FOR INCREASING CRIMINALS AMONG SUCH SOCIETY. DUE TO ABOVE PROBLEMS THE COMMON
PEOPLE
ARE AT
DAGER
.
GOVERNMENT
HAS A HUGE RESPONSIBILITY TO PROTECT
PEOPLE
THROUGH SECURITY FORCES SUCH AS POLICE AND SPECIAL TRAINING ARMY FORCES.
HOWEVER
,
LONGTERM
SOLUTIONS
ARE NEEDED
FOR THESE SITUATIONS. THERE SHOULD BE EQUAL OPPORTUNITIES FOR RIGHTS OF
PEOPLE
SUCH AS, MEALS, EDUCATION AND HEALTH.
GOVERNMENT
OR NON
GOVERNMENT
ORGANIZTIONS
SHOULD PAY ATTENTION TO GIVE FUNDS, SCHOLARSHIPS, OPPORTUNITIES FOR JOBS AND PROPER GUIDANCE FOR DRUG
ADDICTORS
TO
REDUCE
THE PREVALENCE OF CRIMINALS IN
THESES
COMMUNITIES. THE
PEOPLE
WOULD BE
LESSEN
THEIR FEAR AT WALK OUT FROM
HOUSES
AT NIGHT TIME WTH THE ADDRESS OF CAUSES OF POVERTY AND DRUG ADDICTION THROUGH SHORT TERM AND LONG TERM SOLUTIONS FOR THE COMMUNITY.
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IELTS essay IN SOME POORER AREAS OF LARGE CITIES PEOPLE ARE TOO AFRAID TO LEAVE THEIR HOUSES AT NIGHT TIME DUE TO A FEAR OF CRIME. WHAT ARE TGE CAUSES OF CRIME IN THOSE AREAS AND WHAT CAN BE DONE TO TACKLE THOSE PROBLEMS?

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