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In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘’anyone can do it’’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘’anyone can do it’’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. 52r5V
These days, in some countries, debates have been provoked concerning a problem that people do not need talents to be prosperous in the field of arts. From my point of view this idea is justifiable and talent is not valued and the hard work can beat talent. Talent makes people un active and rely less on hard work besides it can not provide the person the level of knowledge and experience that the hard work does. Additionally, talent does not bring benefit to society as much as the hard work does also it does not let the person experience gratitude. However, talent development increases productivity and performance as well as talent gives one's life extra dimension for self fulfilment, socialization and communal outgrowth. Making people un active and relying less on hard work is one of the major reasons that makes talent unappreciated. Having a talent makes people sccumb because of proudness while relying on hard work can motivate self-improvement. Moreover, hard work bestows the person with so many rewards like analytical thinking and time management, it contributes to build one's character, too. Such things can not be gained if person relies on his talen. Further more, talent just benefits the person that he owns and maybe some individuals around, yet hard work brings benefits widely to society, it contributes the good of society and it serves others as it can enrich their lives and push them to move forward. Besides that, reaching goals relying on talent does not give the person the same level of happiness and self- confidence in case of relying on hard work. Anyone who has experienced struggles can attest to how great it feels to overcome and success. On the other hand, relying on talen means that one does not have to do much effort because talent can easily be improved by a little work and that would raise productivity and performance to a high rank. More, having talen and relying on mean that the one has much more time to spend on other feilds and also that give the person time that he can serve to work hard on another thing that he does not have a talent in and like that the one can succeed in more than one field if he has a talent. In conclusion, the need to do a little effort to reach a goal and the much free time that the one has when he relies on talent are potential advantages to rely on talent, yet there are more disadvantages to rely on talent from my own perspective are clearly seen. First, sometimes talent makes people rely on it the level that would make people so un active and may lead to succumb it. second, the less experience and knowledge that can be gained in this case. Further reasons ton not relying on talent are no less essential which are the wide benefits to society that hard work can gives but talent does not and the high self-confidence level which comes when the one work hard to get something and succeed in that.
These days, in
some
countries, debates have
been provoked
concerning a problem that
people
do not need
talents
to be prosperous in the field of arts. From my point of view this
idea
is justifiable and
talent
is not valued and the
hard
work
can beat
talent
.
Talent
makes
people
un
active and rely
less
on
hard
work
besides
it can not provide the
person
the
level
of knowledge and experience that the
hard
work
does
.
Additionally
,
talent
does
not bring
benefit
to
society
as
much
as the
hard
work
does
also
it
does
not
let
the
person
experience gratitude.
However
,
talent
development increases productivity and performance
as well
as
talent
gives
one's life extra dimension for
self fulfilment
, socialization and communal outgrowth. Making
people
un
active and
relying
less
on
hard
work
is one of the major reasons that
makes
talent
unappreciated. Having a
talent
makes
people
sccumb
because
of
proudness
while
relying
on
hard
work
can motivate self-improvement.
Moreover
,
hard
work
bestows the
person
with
so
many
rewards like analytical thinking and
time
management, it contributes to build one's character, too. Such things can not
be gained
if
person
relies on his
talen
.
Further
more,
talent
just
benefits
the
person
that he
owns
and maybe
some
individuals around,
yet
hard
work
brings
benefits
widely
to
society
, it contributes the
good
of
society
and it serves others as it can enrich their
lives
and push them to
move
forward.
Besides
that, reaching goals
relying
on
talent
does
not
give
the
person
the same
level
of happiness and self- confidence in case of
relying
on
hard
work
. Anyone who has experienced struggles can attest to how great it feels to overcome and success.
On the other hand
,
relying
on
talen
means that one
does
not
have to
do
much
effort
because
talent
can
easily
be
improved
by a
little
work
and that would raise productivity and performance to a high rank. More, having
talen
and
relying
on mean that the one has
much
more
time
to spend on other
feilds
and
also
that
give
the
person
time
that he can serve to
work
hard
on another thing that he
does
not have a
talent
in and like that the one can succeed in more than one field if he has a
talent
.
In conclusion
, the need to do a
little
effort to reach a goal and the
much
free
time
that the one has when he relies on
talent
are potential advantages to rely on
talent
,
yet
there are more disadvantages to rely on
talent
from my
own
perspective are
clearly
seen
.
First
,
sometimes
talent
makes
people
rely on it the
level
that would
make
people
so
un
active and may lead to succumb it. second, the
less
experience and knowledge that can
be gained
in this case
.
Further
reasons ton not
relying
on
talent
are no
less
essential which are the wide
benefits
to
society
that
hard
work
can
gives
but
talent
does
not and the high self-confidence
level
which
comes
when the one
work
hard
to
get
something and succeed in that.
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IELTS essay In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘’anyone can do it’’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated.

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