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Write about the following topic. Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. with this opinion? g8k1D
Many individuals have failed to think of the traditional and religious events, festival times, people nowadays only fond of enjoying themselves. I partially agree with this sentence as there are still 20% people who gives value to religion festivals. Most of people donot know the meaning of celebrating festivals and always love to be enjoying their life. They think that its waste of time celebrating them instead of knowing that its country's heritage and prosperity. For example, my neice who is 5 years small then me never celebrates any festivals and even tells us not to as she think that it is gonna waste our money and time. Then her mother forced her to pray although she left home in anger the next minute. Today's children are so spoiled that they cannot understand our festival's values. She preferes more in playing and roaming with her friends in her holidays. For another example, my brother who only celebrate festivals for money which elder people give and never tried of knowing the history of origin of that festival. He even tells his friends to feel the same and not to cherish the moment and pray for the devotees who sacrifised themselves for god. Instead there are old people who tries practises ancient rituals and procedures of the festivals and expains the same to the younger people. But there are only 20% people who understand and 80% donnot even care about them and the festivals. In conclusion, even though our elders tries to keep our heritage constant, i thinks there is more knowledge need to be spread more all over the youngsters.
Many
individuals have failed to
think
of the traditional and religious
events
,
festival
times,
people
nowadays
only
fond of enjoying themselves. I
partially
agree
with this sentence as there are
still
20%
people
who
gives
value to religion festivals. Most of
people
donot
know the meaning of celebrating
festivals
and always
love
to be enjoying their life. They
think
that its waste of time celebrating them
instead
of knowing that its country's heritage and prosperity.
For example
, my
neice
who
is 5 years
small
then me never celebrates any
festivals
and even
tells
us not to as she
think
that it is gonna waste our money and time. Then her mother forced her to pray although she
left
home in anger the
next
minute.
Today
's children are
so
spoiled that they cannot understand our festival's values. She
preferes
more in playing and roaming with her friends in her holidays. For another example, my brother
who
only
celebrate
festivals
for money which elder
people
give and never tried of knowing the history of origin of that
festival
. He even
tells
his friends to feel the same and not to cherish the moment and pray for the devotees
who
sacrifised
themselves for god.
Instead
there are
old
people
who
tries
practises
ancient rituals and procedures of the
festivals
and
expains
the same to the younger
people
.
But
there are
only
20%
people
who
understand and 80%
donnot
even care about them and the festivals.
In conclusion
,
even though
our elders tries to
keep
our heritage constant,
i
thinks
there is more knowledge need to
be spread
more all over the youngsters.
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