In modern society, it is possible to do shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development? 
In modern society, it is possible to do shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another.  jQQ9L
There are many people who prefer to purchase something online all of the world, working from home and conversation with our friends and relative by social platforms such as Twitter, Facebook, Skype and so on become the essential part of our life. This challenge have positive and negative effect on an individual person and our society. I will discuss both of sides in the next paragraphs.
First of all, If we look at the unfavorable aspects, the most important thing is destroying the personal relationships of people. When nation make community via Internet, they lose their civil touch each other. Furthermore, they cannot understand felling of others. Another bad side is that, people can't check the quality of products which they buy online. Lastly, working online is the one of the reason of obesity and some illnesses what related to psychology of society like stress, frustration etc. For example, nowadays the mental illnesses have increased sharply in many countries and in the opinion of the researcher the main reason is to spend a long time on the Internet and not be able to socialize.
However, the internet is more useful recently. It protect our time and energy. People can get everything with a touch. People also saved their time with working online. For example, there are many people who lives away from their family due to long and tiring jobs. But online workers spend more time with relatives and manage their finance without moving.
To sum up, use of Internet for shopping work and community can be seen both of positive and negative of our life and health. But, I personally believe that, using internet is mandatory nowadays, we only should spend time on internet for necessary act without forgetting our real communications. 
There are 
many
 people
 who prefer to 
purchase
 something 
online
 all of the
 world, working from home and conversation with our friends and relative by social platforms such as Twitter, Facebook, Skype and 
so
 on become the essential part of our life. This challenge 
have
 positive
 and 
negative
 effect on an individual person and our society. I will discuss both of sides in the 
next
 paragraphs.
First of all
, If we look at the unfavorable aspects, the most 
important
 thing is destroying the personal relationships of 
people
. When nation 
make
 community via Internet, they lose their civil touch each other. 
Furthermore
, they cannot understand felling of others. Another 
bad
 side is that, 
people
 can't 
check
 the quality of products which they 
buy
 online
. 
Lastly
, working 
online
 is the one of the reason of obesity and 
some
 illnesses what related to psychology of society like 
stress
, frustration etc. 
For example
, nowadays the mental illnesses have increased 
sharply
 in 
many
 countries and in the opinion of the researcher the main reason is to spend a long 
time
 on the Internet and not be able to socialize.
However
, the internet is more useful recently. It 
protect
 our 
time
 and energy. 
People
 can 
get
 everything with a touch. 
People
 also
 saved their 
time
 with working 
online
. 
For example
, there are 
many
 people
 who 
lives
 away from their family due to long and tiring jobs. 
But
 online
 workers spend more 
time
 with relatives and manage their finance without moving.
To sum up, 
use
 of Internet for shopping work and community can be 
seen
 both of 
positive
 and 
negative
 of our life and health. 
But
, I 
personally
 believe that, using internet is mandatory nowadays, we 
only
 should spend 
time
 on internet for necessary act without forgetting our real communications. 
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