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in many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.some people regard this as completely wrong ,while others consider it as valuable work experience ,important for learning and taking responsibility . Discuss both these essays and give your opinion

in many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these essays and give your opinion G5OVe

It is often said that involvement of many children in paid work is thought by some to be an useful experience while other people consider that it can be detrimental. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter on the other hand, it is often said that teenagers working for a salary is wrong if it is exploitative or deprives them of their childhood or chances in life. To put into another way, it potentially exposes them to exploitation through slave labour. For example, in some advanced countries, especially in the US, they are made to work full time but due to their age are not protected by law. As a result, they are paid negligible wages for work that can be tough. Secondly salaried work in children may decrease the quality of their education which is the passport to the future although it can be part-time job. To explicate, they start their adult life with hardworking and do not achieve aims that others who dream of like being well-known in certain job. that's why paid work in the early years reduce speed of road to success

It is often
 said that involvement of many
 children in paid work
 is thought
 by some
 to be an
 useful experience while other people
 consider that it can be detrimental. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour
 of the latter
on
 the other hand, it is often
 said that teenagers
 working for a salary is wrong
 if it is exploitative or deprives them of their childhood or chances in life. To put into another way, it potentially
 exposes them to exploitation through slave labour
. For example
, in some
 advanced countries, especially
 in the US, they are made
 to work
 full time but
 due to their age are not protected by law. As a result
, they are paid
 negligible wages for work
 that can be tough. Secondly
 salaried work
 in children may decrease the quality of their education which is the passport to the future although it can be part-time job. To explicate, they start
 their adult life with hardworking and do not achieve aims that others who dream of like being well-known in certain job. that
's why paid work
 in the early years reduce
 speed of road to success

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IELTS essay in many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these essays and give your opinion

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