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How to bring up a better baby?

How to bring up a better baby? 1PMkN
We are all born the same, yet we all live different lives. Actually, it depends on a person's personality and character. I think that personality and character are created by upbringing. Bringing up a child is a complicated business, requiring certain knowledge, patience, endurance and most importantly, love and attention to children. In my opinion every parent wants to have a well-mannered, intelligent, obedient and educated child in short better baby. In my opinion many parents commit such mistakes. First, they treat their children brutally, scold them, beat them, and they think that we will teach them discipline and bring them up perfectly. They even make him do things he does not like. In this case, the child will grow up withdrawn, depressed, insensitive and distant from parents. Secondly, they are sometimes too spoiled child, even ignore their mistakes, thinking that we are giving them freedom. As a result, the child grows up irresponsible, frivolous and not understanding the word "no". To be honest, I myself don't know exactly how to bring up a better baby. But in my opinion, in order to bring up an improved child, they need to be unburdened and understand their situation. However, many parents think that if a child is small, they shouldn't have any problems. But this is not the case with everyone; we want to tell someone about our problems and we want them to understand us. If you have noticed, even small children like to talk about what they have seen and done. In this way, the child will also learn to understand you. This way you will strengthen the bond with your child. You must take into account the child's characteristics, abilities and even interests. Helping children to find their way in life is not about forcing them to do something. I think you should ask them to try different courses first. Then the child draws a conclusion as to what they like and don't like. In conclusion a lot of people think that children will inherit only their looks, but actually they will inherit but also your habits, self-esteem, trauma, character. Therefore, raising a child is a very big responsibility. If you want a perfect child, first be a perfect person yourself.
We are all born the same,
yet
we all
live
different
lives
. Actually, it depends on a person's personality and character. I
think
that personality and character
are created
by upbringing. Bringing up a
child
is a complicated business, requiring certain knowledge, patience, endurance and most
importantly
,
love
and attention to
children
. In my opinion every
parent
wants
to have a well-mannered, intelligent, obedient and educated
child
in short better baby. In my opinion
many
parents
commit such mistakes.
First
, they treat their
children
brutally
, scold them, beat them, and they
think
that we will teach them discipline and bring them up
perfectly
. They even
make
him do things he does not like.
In this case
, the
child
will grow up withdrawn, depressed, insensitive and distant from
parents
.
Secondly
, they are
sometimes
too spoiled
child
, even
ignore
their mistakes, thinking that we are giving them freedom.
As a result
, the
child
grows up irresponsible, frivolous and not understanding the word
"
no
"
. To be honest, I myself don't know exactly how to bring up a better baby.
But
in my opinion, in order to bring up an
improved
child
, they need to
be unburdened
and understand their situation.
However
,
many
parents
think
that if a
child
is
small
, they shouldn't have any problems.
But
this is not the case with everyone; we
want
to
tell
someone about our
problems and
we
want
them to understand us. If you have noticed, even
small
children
like to talk about what they have
seen
and done. In this way, the
child
will
also
learn to understand you. This way you will strengthen the bond with your
child
. You
must
take into account the child's characteristics, abilities and even interests. Helping
children
to find their way in life is not about forcing them to do something. I
think
you should ask them to try
different
courses
first
. Then the
child
draws a conclusion as to what they like and don't like.
In conclusion
a lot of
people
think
that
children
will inherit
only
their looks,
but
actually they will inherit
but
also
your habits, self-esteem, trauma, character.
Therefore
, raising a
child
is a
very
big
responsibility. If you
want
a perfect
child
,
first
be a perfect person yourself.
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