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Extra Tax For The Fast Food

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During the last decades since the all people started to work for long hours, eating quickly prepared low nutrutied fast food become a trending topic and many people think that there should be regulations from goverment for this problem. In my opinion goverments have to do something about this. In some countries goverments are using this extra money as a resource for health system and it is so useful also people will try other options since the junk foods become expensive. First of all goverments should think about extra tax on fast food to avoid frequency also they could use that money for the treatment of people with obesity or other diseases. If you only impose a higher tax on fast food this situation will led anger from fast food companies and public. So if you are going to raise the tax you have to use that money on a responsible way. In Turkey in the year of 2017 goverment raised the tax on the junk food and used that money for the treatment of people with diabites and obesity and this action loved by the people. With the increation of the fast food taxes people will focus on the other options that quickly prepared and less harmfull to their bodies. Everyone is busy these days, they are always after the foods that do not take much time to prepare but because of the increased prices they will choose more healthier products such as salads or boiled vegetables. In conclusion extra taxes on fast food brings the goverment money to use on better things such as problems caused by fast foods also increased prices could prevent many diseases.

During the last decades since the all people
started
 to work for long hours, eating quickly
 prepared low nutrutied
fast
food
 become a trending topic and many
people
think
 that there should be regulations from goverment
 for this problem. In my opinion goverments
have to
 do something about this. In some
 countries goverments
 are using this extra money
 as a resource for health system and it is so
 useful also
people
 will try other options since the junk foods
 become expensive.

First of all
goverments
 should think
 about extra tax
 on fast
food
 to avoid frequency also
 they could use
 that money
 for the treatment of people
 with obesity or other diseases. If you only
 impose a higher tax
 on fast
food
 this situation will led
 anger from fast
food
companies
 and public. So if
 you are going to raise the tax
 you have to
use
 that money
 on a responsible way. In Turkey in the year of 2017 goverment
 raised the tax
 on the junk food
 and used
 that money
 for the treatment of people
 with diabites
 and obesity and this action loved
 by the people
.

With the increation
 of the fast
food
taxes
people
 will focus on the other options that quickly
 prepared and less harmfull
 to their bodies. Everyone is busy these days, they are always after the foods
 that do not take much time to prepare but
because
 of the increased prices they will choose more healthier
 products such as salads or boiled vegetables.

In conclusion
 extra taxes
 on fast
food
 brings the goverment
money
 to use
 on better things such as problems caused by fast
foods
also
 increased prices could prevent
many
 diseases. 

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