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People have different hobbies ranging from reading books to mountain hiking. According to some, hobbies must be difficult to be enjoyable while other oppose the idea. What is your viewpoint on this?

People have different hobbies ranging from reading books to mountain hiking. According to some, hobbies must be difficult to be enjoyable while other oppose the idea. What is your viewpoint on this? wyWwd
Science ancient times, many thinkers and philosophers considered that a person should always have something to do. They said, "A rolling stone gathers no moss". People come up with certain leisure time activities. Some opine that hobbies should be difficult to be enjoyable while others support the opposing idea. I disagree with the statement. On the one hand, many people enjoy difficult hobbies. This kind of activity requires a high level of knowledge. For example, coding involves having a good understanding of mathematical concepts such as algebra and physics, it can be used to improve the project you are making. Usually, people who love difficult hobbies are more interested in the outcome, than the very process. Conversely, easy hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. For instance, dancing gives people joy and happiness. This hobby requires very little equipment and can be learned easily. Hobbyists are more interested in the process rather than the result. Anyone can do this type of activity without knowing too much about it. In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, while difficult hobbies requires more time and knowledge.
Science ancient times,
many
thinkers and philosophers considered that a person should always have something to do. They said,
"
A rolling stone gathers no moss
"
.
People
come
up with certain leisure time activities.
Some
opine that
hobbies
should be
difficult
to be enjoyable while others support the opposing
idea
. I disagree with the statement. On the one hand,
many
people
enjoy
difficult
hobbies
. This kind of activity requires a high level of knowledge.
For example
, coding involves having a
good
understanding of mathematical concepts such as algebra and physics, it can be
used
to
improve
the project you are making.
Usually
,
people
who
love
difficult
hobbies
are more interested in the outcome, than the
very
process.
Conversely
, easy
hobbies
can
sometimes
be more exciting.
For instance
, dancing gives
people
joy and happiness. This
hobby
requires
very
little
equipment and can
be learned
easily
. Hobbyists are more interested in the process
rather
than the result. Anyone can do this type of activity without knowing too much about it.
In conclusion
, simple
hobbies
can be fun and relaxing, while
difficult
hobbies
requires more time and knowledge.
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