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Explorations and Exchange

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Moving on to the benefits of the four world zones being connected, some benefits from a European perspective were that for many European explorers, exploring the New World made them very famous, one good example of this would be Christopher Columbus, a very famous explorer that was famous for not only his discoveries that he wrote about and told to the Kings and Queens of Spain but also the goods he found along the way through trading with Natives People or digging land with his crew members. Moreover, along his way, he encountered the Native people of Arawaks, and Columbus for an explorer was a very smart guy and he used his intelligence on goods to trick the Native people of Arawak into trading with him for their goods instead of his. He did this by showing them fake pearls for jewelry, and many more, then eventually he got a lot of goods from them. He didn’t stop there though, he saw that some rebellion was going on around him when he was trading with the Natives people. Columbus saw that they were built with good bodies but when Columbus showed them sharp steel with a handle, and a sword to the Arawaks they reluctantly held it with their two hands and eventually cut themselves with Columbus doing nothing. However, with their good and well-built bodies, Columbus saw that they would work as fine slaves and then without hesitation enslaved them along with conquering their land for Spain (Columbus).
Moving on to the benefits of the four world zones
being connected
,
some
benefits from a European perspective were that for
many
European explorers, exploring the New World made them
very
famous
, one
good
example of this would be Christopher Columbus, a
very
famous
explorer that was
famous
for not
only
his discoveries that he wrote about and
told
to the Kings and Queens of Spain
but
also
the
goods
he found along the way through trading with
Natives
People
or digging land with his crew members.
Moreover
, along his way, he encountered the
Native
people
of Arawaks, and Columbus for an explorer was a
very
smart guy
and
he
used
his intelligence on
goods
to trick the
Native
people
of Arawak into trading with him for their
goods
instead
of his. He did this by showing them fake pearls for jewelry, and
many
more, then
eventually
he
got
a lot of
goods
from them. He didn’t
stop
there though, he
saw
that
some
rebellion was going on around him when he was trading with the
Natives
people
. Columbus
saw
that they
were built
with
good
bodies
but
when Columbus
showed
them sharp steel with a handle, and a sword to the Arawaks they
reluctantly
held it with their two hands and
eventually
cut
themselves with Columbus doing nothing.
However
, with their
good
and well-built bodies, Columbus
saw
that they would work as fine slaves and then without hesitation enslaved them along with conquering their land for Spain (Columbus).
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