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Describe a happy childhood memory. You should say: when and where the incident you remember happened who you were with what happened exactly and explain why it is a happy memory.

Describe a happy childhood memory. You should say: when and where the incident you remember happened who you were with what happened exactly and explain why it is a happy memory. dQoor
When I was a kid my mother and father decided to go a trip in my school holiday. They planed to go to the Ella which is located in up country in Sri Lanka. At that time, I heared about the scenic beauty of that mountain area and I bother my parent about to see this area. Both my parent possed a railway warrent. Therefore, we decided to go Ella by train that it was budget freindly. At that day we arrived to the station on time to get our booked seats. The journey was amazing where we belonged the first class seats. We brought the breakfast and lunch from the railway canteen which had delicious food varieties. After we arrived on Badulla station, we had met many foriegners who visied to see famous tourist attraction such as the Nine arches bridge and the Dunhida falls. I remind that I was eager to show my English knowledge by talking with those foriegners. Also, my parents were really proud about me when I communicated with them. Furthermore, I had seen a lot of seanic views which was the one of the happiest and beautiful memory of my life. It was the two days trip and we visites a lot of natural land remaks and historical site. No also the beauty that I had seen, It was the last trip that I went with my father. He was passed away after one year of the trip and we never made any arrangment after that visit. Overall, It was the beautiful childhood memory that remind my father's love, affection and caring for me and my family.
When I was a kid my mother and father decided to go a
trip
in my school holiday. They planed to go to the Ella which
is located
in up country in Sri Lanka. At that time, I
heared
about the scenic beauty of that mountain area and I bother my parent about to
see
this area. Both my parent
possed
a railway
warrent
.
Therefore
, we decided to go Ella by train that it was budget
freindly
. At that day we arrived to the station on time to
get
our booked seats. The journey was amazing where we belonged the
first
class
seats. We brought the breakfast and lunch from the railway canteen which had delicious food varieties. After we
arrived on
Badulla
station, we had met
many
foriegners
who
visied
to
see
famous
tourist attraction such as the Nine arches bridge and the
Dunhida
falls. I remind that I was eager to
show
my English knowledge by talking with those
foriegners
.
Also
, my parents were
really
proud about me when I communicated with them.
Furthermore
, I had
seen
a lot of
seanic
views which was the one of the happiest and
beautiful
memory of my life. It was the two days
trip and
we
visites
a lot of
natural land
remaks
and historical site. No
also
the beauty that I had
seen
, It was the last
trip
that I
went with
my father. He
was passed
away after one year of the
trip and
we never made any
arrangment
after that visit.
Overall
, It was the
beautiful
childhood memory that remind my father's
love
, affection and caring for me and my family.
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IELTS essay Describe a happy childhood memory. You should say: when and where the incident you remember happened who you were with what happened exactly and explain why it is a happy memory.

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