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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? kjYEn
Environmental concerns have always been an issue around the world. However, along with rise in global warming population growth and education is a rising problem around the world. The complications that my country would face in coming years are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs along with solutions to resolve such hardships. Education is one of the major problems India as a country has been facing over the past couple years and is progressing on a rapid pace. Although Southern India has an phenomenal literacy rate the case is not the same when compared to the Norther province. Child Labor is still prevalent in the country as many still feel its the only way to make a decent living when all members of the family are employed. However, if the masses are educated about the benefits of education, things would be much better for the family and the society as a whole. To curb this ever growing issue government and private sector should make it mandatory to employee only educated personnel to the organization and more over increase the minimum qualification requirements to be employed. Like rather having 12th Standard as a minimum requirement to join call centers which is in high demand, organizations should change the minimum qualification and raise the bar to a minimum of graduation degree. This will not just improve the educational complications in the country but will also grant loyal and professional employees for companies. As for population, India has been acing the race for quite sometime. If the population keeps growing as it has been all this while, it is going to affect the society as whole, with more unemployed individuals resolving to dire measures to make ends meet. The only way to curbs such an issue would be to educate the country about contraceptives and at them same time make it available to everyone. It should also be encouraged rather than be frowned upon. Only then can the country control the population growth as a whole. Best to carry out such an operation is conduct sex education in schools and make it available not just for kids but also for adults. To conclude education and population will be an issue in the near future but at the same it is an obstacle that can be resolved with proper planning and implementation.
Environmental concerns have always been an
issue
around the world.
However
, along with rise in global warming
population
growth and
education
is a rising problem around the world. The complications that my
country
would face in coming years
are discussed
in the forthcoming paragraphs along with solutions to resolve such hardships. Education is one of the major problems India as a
country
has been facing over the past couple years and is progressing on a rapid pace. Although Southern India has
an
phenomenal literacy rate the case is not the same when compared to the Norther province. Child Labor is
still
prevalent in the
country
as
many
still
feel
its
the
only
way to
make
a decent living when all members of the family
are employed
.
However
, if the masses
are educated
about the benefits of
education
, things would be much better for the family and the society as a whole. To curb this ever growing
issue
government
and private sector should
make
it mandatory to employee
only
educated personnel to the organization and more over increase the
minimum
qualification requirements to
be employed
. Like
rather
having 12th Standard as a
minimum
requirement to
join
call centers which is in high demand, organizations should
change
the
minimum
qualification and raise the bar to a
minimum
of graduation degree. This will not
just
improve
the educational complications in the
country
but
will
also
grant loyal and professional employees for
companies
. As for
population
, India has been acing the race for quite sometime. If the
population
keeps
growing as it has been all this while, it is going to affect the society as whole, with more unemployed individuals resolving to dire measures to
make
ends
meet
. The
only
way to curbs such an
issue
would be to educate the
country
about contraceptives and at them same time
make
it available to everyone. It should
also
be encouraged
rather
than
be frowned
upon.
Only
then can the
country
control the
population
growth as a whole. Best to carry out such an operation is conduct sex
education
in schools and
make
it available not
just
for kids
but
also
for adults.
To conclude
education
and
population
will be an
issue
in the near future
but
at the same it is an obstacle that can
be resolved
with proper planning and implementation.
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