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car ownership increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.how true do you think this statement is?what measures can government take to discourae people from using their cars.

car ownership increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how true do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourae people from using their cars. WGmRa
Peaking population throughout time have caused plenty of problems including blockage of road came into existence in certain cities and it would not be wrong if i say that tis is happening in every nation. Considerably this is originated surprisingly fast by individuals having cars in the span of recent three decades. It is correct that traffic jams are much common that they are effecting lives. With technology, Humanity invented many source of moving from one place to another. In past people had to walk to their work for miles, had to leave their families behind in results they were able to earn money for their parents and children to feed their dependents because the roundtrip was time consuming. As time flied, every person is now in hurry. This this lack of time also shrinks the roads caused by owners buying more cars. In recent research, we found that four to six people can sit in a car comparing to this many people can use public transport. Single human is looking for ease and to have their own transport tend to not wait for the bus. In that case, we came to know that most of the time there is one individual in car. I there is one person taking place of 5 people we have to look for solution. It was concluded that in future that will cause more issues and disasters. There are few changes that government can make to over come and alter the effect, playing their role by building under passes, flyovers, bridges, more traffic signals effecting liberty of individuals. Government can make laws to prevent these flaws. They can order taxes, increase security and introducing penalties and fines for non followers. I personally think we can make this world a better place if we play our crucial and important role first. Advertisements and exercise should be offered by government in supervision of defined people supporting usage of public transport like metro and informing our selves the consequences.
Peaking population throughout
time
have caused
plenty
of problems including blockage of road came into existence in certain cities and it would not be
wrong
if
i
say that
tis
is happening in every nation.
Considerably
this
is originated
surprisingly
fast
by individuals having
cars
in the span of recent three decades. It is correct that traffic jams are much common that they are effecting
lives
. With technology, Humanity invented
many source
of moving from one place to another. In past
people
had to walk to their work for miles, had to
leave
their families behind in results they were able to earn money for their parents and children to feed their dependents
because
the
roundtrip
was
time consuming
. As
time
flied, every person is
now
in hurry.
This this
lack of
time
also
shrinks the roads caused by owners buying more
cars
. In recent research, we found that four to six
people
can sit in a
car
comparing to this
many
people
can
use
public transport. Single human is looking for
ease
and to have their
own
transport tend to not wait for the bus.
In that case
, we came to know that most of the
time
there is one individual in
car
. I there
is
one person taking place of 5
people
we
have to
look for solution. It
was concluded
that in future that will cause more issues and disasters. There are few
changes
that
government
can
make
to over
come
and alter the effect, playing their role by building under passes, flyovers, bridges, more traffic signals effecting liberty of individuals.
Government
can
make
laws to
prevent
these flaws. They can order taxes, increase security and introducing penalties and fines for non followers. I
personally
think
we can
make
this world a better place if we play our crucial and
important
role
first
. Advertisements and exercise should
be offered
by
government
in supervision of defined
people
supporting usage of public transport like metro and informing our selves the consequences.
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IELTS essay car ownership increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how true do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourae people from using their cars.

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