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About a story which I remember

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I want to tell you about a story that my grandfather told me when I was 12. When I was at school, I used to live with my grandpa during the summer holidays. His house is outside the city, about 60 kilometers away. His house is extremely big and there are a number of various trees. During the day we work in his garden and in the evening he will tell him stories about his army days. I don't know if it was a true story, on the contrary he spoke with enthusiasm and emotion, and I always believed him. He was for 3 years in the Krasnoyarsk Territory. It must have been extremely cold there. Once he told us how he won a competition among soldiers in freestyle wrestling. His opponent was from Estonia and was supremely strong. But my grandpa wasn't a gift either. There was an uncompromising battle between them and my grandfather won. And after the fight, both rivals became friends and shook hands with each other. I remember this story because thanks to sports, you can make friends with others. Both you and others also become strong with such friendly rivalry.
I want to
tell
you about a
story
that my grandfather
told
me when I was 12. When I was at school, I
used
to
live
with my grandpa during the summer holidays. His
house
is outside the city, about 60 kilometers away. His
house
is
extremely
big
and there are a number of various trees. During the day we work in his garden and in the evening he will
tell
him
stories
about his army days. I don't know if it was a true
story
,
on the contrary
he spoke with enthusiasm and emotion, and I always believed him. He was for 3 years in the Krasnoyarsk Territory. It
must
have been
extremely
cold
there. Once he
told
us how he won a competition among soldiers in freestyle wrestling. His opponent was from Estonia and was
supremely
strong.
But
my grandpa wasn't a gift either. There was an uncompromising battle between them and my grandfather won. And after the fight, both rivals became friends and shook hands with each other. I remember this
story
because
thanks to sports, you can
make
friends with others. Both you
and others
also
become strong with such friendly rivalry.
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