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Letter of amendment to editor who has published wrong information about your friend

Letter of amendment to editor who has published wrong information about your friend e7J
I have always enjoyed reading the business section of your newspaper. I recently discovered that one of your correspondents had covered a story on one of my dear friend, Akshay, and his startup, Health Company. It was a well written article, however I found a couple of informations mentioned in it to be wrong. It is my duty to bring them to your notice and would expect you look into them seriously. The article appeared on the Sunday edition of your daily and was published on page 11. The article had a heading, 'The Fitness Mantra Company'. In the article, the writer covered various facets about Ackshay's life and how he got into the startup and led the company to new heights. I found that there were a couple of errors such as your correspondent mentioned Acksahy dropped out of engineering. The article also mentioned that the 'Health Company' is eyeing various Bollywood stars for integration and would soon be entering the fitness line actors. These statements are not only wrong but are also assumptions that have not been thoroughly looked into and no facts have been provided. Akshay has successfully completed his Bachelors in Technology and is not a dropout. Neither does his company have any plans for having a Bollywood star onboard. His company is presently focussing on mass market and it plans to remain in the same segment for a while. He has no plans to take his company to Bollywood or get associated with it. It is pivotal that you bring these mistakes done by your writer out as such information is harming the company. People associated with the company are fearing changes in company's visions and credibilty of Akshay. I would hence require you to publish a formal apology in your newspaper along with bringing in light the errors that were made. I would also like your team to republish the article with changes made else we will have to file for defammation. I would also ask you to take care in future for such mistakes regarding all companies specially Health Company. Hoping you would comply with my requests. Yours truly Shaurya
I have always enjoyed reading the business section of your newspaper. I recently discovered that one of your correspondents had covered a story on one of my dear friend, Akshay, and his startup, Health
Company
. It was a well written
article
,
however
I found a couple of
informations
mentioned in it to be
wrong
. It is my duty to bring them to your notice and would
expect
you look into them
seriously
. The
article
appeared on the Sunday edition of your daily and
was published
on page 11. The
article
had a heading, 'The Fitness Mantra
Company
'. In the
article
, the writer covered various facets about
Ackshay
's life and how he
got
into the startup and led the
company
to new heights. I found that there were a couple of errors such as your correspondent mentioned
Acksahy
dropped out of engineering. The
article
also
mentioned that the 'Health
Company
' is eyeing various Bollywood stars for integration and would
soon
be entering the fitness line actors. These statements are not
only
wrong
but
are
also
assumptions that have not been
thoroughly
looked into and no facts have
been provided
. Akshay has
successfully
completed his Bachelors in Technology and is not a dropout. Neither does his
company
have any plans for having a Bollywood star onboard. His
company
is
presently
focussing on mass market and it plans to remain in the same segment for a while. He has no plans to take his
company
to Bollywood or
get
associated with it. It is pivotal that you bring these mistakes done by your writer out as such information is harming the
company
.
People
associated with the
company
are fearing
changes
in
company
's visions and
credibilty
of Akshay. I would
hence
require you to publish a formal apology in your newspaper along with bringing in light the errors that
were made
. I would
also
like your team to republish the
article
with
changes
made else we will
have to
file for
defammation
.
I
would
also
ask you to take care in future for such mistakes regarding all
companies
specially
Health
Company
. Hoping you would comply with my requests. Yours
truly
Shaurya
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