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With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people

Nowadays, one of the most essential issues in this world is starvation. Crop failure contributes more to that issue and due to that reason, scientists and engineer collaborated together to develop a technology which modifies food and is well known as GM Foods. GM Foods is believed can feed numerous peoples. I completely disagree with this idea.
It has been proved that GM foods can make farming easier. Firstly, it will make crops will be more resistant since GM foods a modified gene that protects them against pests and insects. Secondly, it also will be cheaper in light of the fact that to plan seeds which have been modified only need less water and less land. It means it will reduce cost and grow efficiently. Thirdly, generally modification can increase nutritional value or enhance flavour. This will ensure people have more access to quantity and quality food.
On the other side, genetically engineering foods is a relatively new practice, it is known about the long-term effects and safety. It means the main issue will be relating to health matters although the research is still ongoing. I do believe by forcing or altering something to foods, it will bring much damage. GM foods have more potential to trigger allergic reactions. This is because GM Foods contains genes from allergen which will prompt an allergic reactions. Beside it, they are more resistant to certain antibiotics and could pass on to humans. This will inflict people’s ability to defend against illness or diseases. The most important thing, some said that eating GM foods will contribute more to the development of cancer.
In conclusion, it is urgently to solve feeding issue over the world, but we must put attention to health issue especially.
Nowadays, one of the most essential issues in this world is starvation. Crop failure contributes more to that issue and due to that reason, scientists and engineer collaborated together to develop a technology which modifies food and is well known as GM Foods. GM Foods
is believed
can feed numerous peoples. I completely disagree with this
idea
.

It has
been proved
that GM foods can
make
farming easier.
Firstly
, it will
make
crops will be more resistant since GM foods a modified gene that protects them against pests and insects.
Secondly
, it
also
will be cheaper in light of the fact that to plan seeds which have
been modified
only
need less water and less land. It means it will
reduce
cost and grow
efficiently
.
Thirdly
,
generally
modification can increase nutritional value or enhance
flavour
. This will ensure people have more access to quantity and quality food.

On the other side,
genetically
engineering foods is a
relatively
new practice, it
is known
about the long-term effects and safety. It means the main issue will be relating to health matters although the research is
still
ongoing. I do believe by forcing or altering something to foods, it will bring much damage. GM foods have more potential to trigger allergic reactions. This is
because
GM Foods contains genes from allergen which will prompt an allergic
reactions
. Beside it, they are more resistant to certain antibiotics and could pass on to humans. This will inflict people’s ability to defend against illness or diseases. The most
important
thing,
some
said that eating GM foods will contribute more to the development of cancer.

In conclusion
, it is
urgently
to solve feeding issue over the world,
but
we
must
put attention to health issue
especially
.

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