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University education has played a very important role in our everyday life, it is arguable that students should spend more time to on their need while others defend that some demanding subjects should be fully focused.

In a period of years, it is undeniable that university education has played a dispensable role in every society that brings a variety of opportunities to our students. However, it is often argued that university students should learn depending on their needs, whilst others defend an idea that relevant subjects which are similar to science and technology, they must be studied. In this essay, both views will be equally discussed and I am into the first idea because of many reasons.
Initially, we are going to discuss some of main benefits of freedom in choosing subjects by university students. Selecting proper subjects is actually a beneficial point to have fully understanding in their necessary majors. For instance, if a student is truly into mechanical engineering, he or she should have chosen Math, Physics, and some kinds of relevant mechanical stuff. Additionally, it would be so knowledgeable focusing on relevant subjects only and developing internal skills for their future careers.
However, there is a significant revolution of our society which requires many types of subjects relating to science and technology. Learning those categories would do wonders for the contribution and making honor to our country. In fact, our GDP has been increasing fast and gradually taking responsibility for those tech-like facilities, advanced subjects will be manipulated widely in such situations.
I find myself interested in the first opinion because I suppose that learning needless and unnecessary subjects can be a massive time-sucker especially university students disliking and assuming those kinds of science ones tedious, that can lead to bad overall average marks.
In a period of years, it is undeniable that university education has played a dispensable role in every society that brings a variety of opportunities to our
students
.
However
, it is
often
argued that university
students
should learn depending on their needs, whilst others defend an
idea
that relevant subjects which are similar to science and technology, they
must
be studied
. In this essay, both views will be
equally
discussed and
I am into the
first
idea
because
of
many
reasons.

Initially
, we are going to discuss
some
of main benefits of freedom in choosing subjects by university
students
. Selecting proper subjects is actually a beneficial point to have
fully
understanding in their necessary majors.
For instance
, if a
student
is
truly
into mechanical engineering, he or she should have chosen Math, Physics, and
some
kinds of relevant mechanical stuff.
Additionally
, it would be
so
knowledgeable focusing on relevant subjects
only
and developing internal
skills
for their future careers.

However
, there is a significant revolution of our society which requires
many
types of subjects relating to science and technology. Learning those categories would do wonders for the contribution and making honor to our country. In fact, our GDP has been increasing
fast
and
gradually
taking responsibility for those tech-like facilities, advanced subjects will
be manipulated
widely
in such situations.

I find myself interested in the
first
opinion
because
I suppose that learning needless and unnecessary subjects can be a massive time-sucker
especially
university
students
disliking and assuming those kinds of science ones tedious, that can lead to
bad
overall
average marks.

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