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Today, world become global village, due to the advancement of technology thus we can communicate with our friends and family who live in other country.

Today, world become global village, due to the advancement of technology thus we can communicate with our friends and family who live in other country. Also we can arrange numerous international activity such sports games, events and exhibitions. Therefore some citizens believe that hosting an international sports games or events are beneficial for the nation, however opponents argue that it is unprofitable. I agree with the former view and this essay will describe both view in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasons for hosting an international events, first and for most reason is that it is enhance country's economy and develop good relation with the other nations. In addition, international events through people can represent their country at international platform, thus the country's value become increases at international level when ones gets an achievement in the game. Furthermore, a numbers of people visit host country to watch the international events and they can explore their knowledge about the host nation and get to know about the country's culture and tradition. So, it is also represent the the country's cultural value at national platform.
On the other hand there are some difficulties too if a country host and international event, than government of the host country expenses become increase and they don't have enough money for their own country's primary need like healthcare and education. Sometimes some disease cussing viruses transmit through people who come to host country for an event and whole country facing the problem.
To conclude, to host an international events is overall cause a good impact on host country. There are some consiquenties which are facing by host countries people but they are few and niglatable.
Today
, world become global village, due to the advancement of technology
thus
we can communicate with our friends and family who
live
in other country.
Also
we can arrange numerous international activity such sports games, events and exhibitions.
Therefore
some
citizens believe that hosting an international sports games or events are beneficial for the nation,
however
opponents argue that it is unprofitable. I
agree
with the former view and this essay will
describe
both view in the upcoming paragraph.

To
begin
with, there are plethora of reasons for hosting an international
events
,
first
and for most reason is that it is
enhance
country's economy and develop
good
relation with the other nations.
In addition
, international events through people can represent their country at international platform,
thus
the country's value become increases at international level when ones
gets
an achievement in the game.
Furthermore
,
a numbers
of people visit host country to
watch
the international
events and
they can explore their knowledge about the host nation and
get
to know about the country's culture and tradition.
So
, it is
also
represent
the the
country's cultural value at national platform.

On the other hand there are
some
difficulties too if a country host and international event,
than
government
of the host country expenses become
increase and
they don't have
enough
money for their
own
country's primary need like healthcare and education.
Sometimes
some
disease cussing viruses transmit through people who
come
to host country for an event and whole country facing the problem.

To conclude
, to host an international
events
is
overall
cause a
good
impact on host country. There are
some
consiquenties
which are facing by host countries people
but
they are few and
niglatable
.

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