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THE RATE OF YOUTH CRIME HAS INCREASED IN RECENT YEARS. WHY? WHAT CAN BE DONE TO SOLVE THE PROBLEM?

THE RATE OF JUVENILE DELINQUENCY IS RAPIDLY INCREASING IN OUR MODERN SOCIETY NOWADAYS. WHILE THERE ARE SEVERAL REASONS EXPLAINING WHY COMMITING A CRIME AMONG THE YOUTH BECOMES WIDESPREAD IN THE STATUS QUO, THEY ALSO HAVE SOME APPROPRIATE SOLUTIONS TO ADDRESS THIS PROBLEM.
ON THE ONE HAND, THE GROWTH OF YOUTH CRIME IS ATTRIBUTED TO SEVERAL REASONS: FIRSTLY, TODAY’S PARENTS ARE OFTEN OVERWHELMED WITH THEIR HECTIC WORKING SCHEDULES, CAUSING THEM TO GRADUALLY FORGET THEIR RESPONSIBILITY ON NURTURING CHILDREN WITH ETHICAL LESSONS. IN ADDITION, ADOLESCENTS REACHING THE AGE OF PUBERTY ARE OFTEN IMPRESSIONABLE AND GULLIBLE; THEREFORE, THEY CAN BE EASILY TEMPTED BY BAD PEERS TO ENGAGE IN SOCIAL EVILS SUCH AS STEALING, DRUG ABUSE, PICKPOCKETING AND SO ON. SECONDLY, CHILDREN’S BEHAVIORS ARE THE SHADOWS OF THEIR PARENTS’ ACTIONS, HENCE, WHEN YOUNGSTERS WITNESS VIOLENCE INSIDE THE HOUSEHOLD, THEY ARE INDIRECTLY CONFORMING THEMSELVES WITH SUCH MINDSET AND PERSONALITY, WHICH PROMPTS THEM TO MIMIC THESE NEGATIVE ACTIONS IN LIFE.
ON THE OTHER HAND, THIS ISSUE CAN BE ADDRESSED IN SOME EFFICIENT WAYS. PARENTS HAVE TO MANAGE THEIR TIME WISELY –BALANCING THEIR OBLIGATIONS AT WORK AND TO THEIR FAMILY. WHEN PARENTS SPEND TIME WITH THEIR CHILDREN CLOSELY, THEY CAN BE ABLE TO EDUCATE THEIR OFFSPRINGS ABOUT THE AFTERMATHS OF INVOLVING ONESELF IN ILLEGAL ACTIVITIES AND TEACH THEM HOW TO ESCAPE FROM SOCIAL EVILS. AS A RESULT, CHILDREN ARE MORE LIKELY TO DEVELOP GOOD SENSE OF MORALITY, BEING ABLE TO DISTINGUISH WHAT IS RIGHT FROM WRONG. MOREVOVER, WITH THE RISE OF DIGITAL AGE, AUTHORITIES CAN SAVE THE YOUTH BY MITIGATING THE NEGATIVE IMPACT OF COMPUTER GAMES THROUGH CENSORSHIP -BOTH VIDEO GAME AND FILM CONTENTS. IN THIS WAY, THE HARMS ARE ELIMINATED, MAKING A SAFER ENVIRONMENT FOR CHILDREN WHEN THEY GET ACCESS TO DIGITAL INFORMATION. CONSEQUENTLY, THE RATE OF IMMATURE CRIMINALS IS RESTRICTED.
TO SUM UP, SINCE COMMITING A CRIME AMONGST YOUTH OF TODAY HAS BEEN AN IMPERATIVE ISSUE FOR SOCIETY IN RECENT YEARS, BOTH PARENTS AND GOVERNMENT HAVE TO WORK.
THE RATE OF JUVENILE DELINQUENCY IS
RAPIDLY
INCREASING IN OUR MODERN SOCIETY NOWADAYS. WHILE THERE ARE SEVERAL REASONS EXPLAINING WHY
COMMITING
A CRIME AMONG THE YOUTH BECOMES WIDESPREAD IN THE STATUS QUO, THEY
ALSO
HAVE
SOME
APPROPRIATE SOLUTIONS TO ADDRESS THIS PROBLEM.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE GROWTH OF YOUTH CRIME
IS ATTRIBUTED
TO SEVERAL REASONS:
FIRSTLY
,
TODAY
’S PARENTS ARE
OFTEN
OVERWHELMED WITH THEIR HECTIC WORKING SCHEDULES, CAUSING THEM TO
GRADUALLY
FORGET THEIR RESPONSIBILITY ON NURTURING CHILDREN WITH ETHICAL LESSONS.
IN ADDITION
, ADOLESCENTS REACHING THE AGE OF PUBERTY ARE
OFTEN
IMPRESSIONABLE AND GULLIBLE;
THEREFORE
, THEY CAN BE
EASILY
TEMPTED BY
BAD
PEERS TO ENGAGE IN SOCIAL EVILS SUCH AS STEALING, DRUG ABUSE,
PICKPOCKETING
AND
SO
ON.
SECONDLY
, CHILDREN’S BEHAVIORS ARE THE SHADOWS OF THEIR PARENTS’ ACTIONS,
HENCE
, WHEN YOUNGSTERS WITNESS VIOLENCE INSIDE THE HOUSEHOLD, THEY ARE
INDIRECTLY
CONFORMING THEMSELVES WITH SUCH MINDSET AND PERSONALITY, WHICH PROMPTS THEM TO MIMIC THESE
NEGATIVE
ACTIONS IN LIFE.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THIS ISSUE CAN
BE ADDRESSED
IN
SOME
EFFICIENT WAYS. PARENTS
HAVE TO
MANAGE THEIR TIME
WISELY
–BALANCING THEIR OBLIGATIONS AT WORK AND TO THEIR FAMILY. WHEN PARENTS SPEND TIME WITH THEIR CHILDREN
CLOSELY
, THEY CAN BE ABLE TO EDUCATE THEIR
OFFSPRINGS
ABOUT THE AFTERMATHS OF INVOLVING ONESELF IN ILLEGAL ACTIVITIES AND TEACH THEM HOW TO ESCAPE FROM SOCIAL EVILS.
AS A RESULT
, CHILDREN ARE MORE LIKELY TO DEVELOP
GOOD
SENSE OF MORALITY, BEING ABLE TO DISTINGUISH WHAT IS RIGHT FROM
WRONG
.
MOREVOVER
, WITH THE RISE OF DIGITAL AGE, AUTHORITIES CAN SAVE THE YOUTH BY MITIGATING THE
NEGATIVE
IMPACT OF COMPUTER GAMES THROUGH CENSORSHIP -BOTH VIDEO GAME AND FILM CONTENTS. IN THIS WAY, THE HARMS
ARE ELIMINATED
, MAKING A SAFER ENVIRONMENT FOR CHILDREN WHEN THEY
GET
ACCESS TO DIGITAL INFORMATION.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE RATE OF IMMATURE CRIMINALS
IS RESTRICTED
.

TO SUM UP, SINCE
COMMITING
A CRIME
AMONGST
YOUTH OF
TODAY
HAS BEEN AN IMPERATIVE ISSUE FOR SOCIETY IN RECENT YEARS, BOTH PARENTS AND
GOVERNMENT
HAVE TO
WORK.

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