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some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes

Death is not the only solution for criminals who committed crime either its violent or non- violent. Mostly, the punishment is given to the criminal according to their violence. There are two many pros and cones of giving death penalty to the criminals.
Firstly, the advantages of giving a death penalty to the criminal is more a right option to create a sound for the other criminal. It helps in the reduction of criminal and our community would feel safe. Like, rape rate is increasing day by day, if the criminals are penalties right after their crime than the other criminals will be forced to think before committing any rape with other girls. Teenagers feel more safe and they can enjoy their life without any dare. People can freely wear gold items and buy expensive items and gifts.
On the other hands, there are many disadvantages of death penalty because the death rate is already increasing day by day with other problems. if the penalty death signed the death rate boost up. Also, it increases the poverty in the society. For instance, person commit crime and he result is death and if he or she is married then the whole family's future is ruined. More poverty will lead to increase in the undeveloped societies and unemployment.
In conclusion, there are more plus points for not giving death penalty. Any punishment will be given so that the society do not get affected by these crimes.
Death is not the
only
solution for criminals who committed crime either its violent or non- violent.
Mostly
, the punishment is
given
to the criminal according to their violence. There are
two
many
pros and cones of giving death penalty to the criminals.

Firstly
, the advantages of giving a death penalty to the criminal is
more a right
option to create a sound for the other criminal. It
helps
in the reduction of criminal and our community would feel safe. Like, rape rate is increasing day by day, if the criminals are penalties right after their crime than the other criminals will
be forced
to
think
before
committing any rape with other girls.
Teenagers
feel more
safe and
they can enjoy their life without any dare.
People
can
freely
wear gold items and
buy
expensive items and gifts.

On the other hands, there are
many
disadvantages of death penalty
because
the death rate is already increasing day by day with other problems.
if
the penalty death signed the death rate boost up.
Also
, it increases the poverty in the society.
For instance
, person commit
crime and
he
result
is death and if he or she
is married
then the whole family's future
is ruined
. More poverty will lead to increase in the undeveloped societies and unemployment.

In conclusion
, there are more plus points for not giving death penalty. Any punishment will be
given
so
that the society do not
get
affected
by these crimes.

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